cliffside awakes (WIP)
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 11 September 2025 at 3:56am
Topic: cliffside awakes (WIP)
Posted By: Jocher
Subject: cliffside awakes (WIP)
Date Posted: 10 September 2009 at 11:05am
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i want to start a new pic called cliffside awakes.
There is a cliffside, with many abstract things in it. You can see many many things in it, like some Faces, animals and more. Here is a fast wip: 
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Posted By: Jocher
Date Posted: 11 September 2009 at 2:03am
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i did the front,
i think maybe in 5-6 hours i load it up |
Posted By: Manupix
Date Posted: 11 September 2009 at 3:59am
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I've had another good look at your gallery. Your drawing ability is outstanding, but I think you might give more attention to light. Many of your pieces don't have a very definite lightsource, or don't have a real connexion between the lightsource and the shadows. The best one (in terms of light) would be Headman; and even it could use some strong cast shadows. What brought me to write this is this: your early wips (here and attic) are unreadble to viewers possibly because your light is not defined at this stage, so what we see in those wips is just color patches. Now, I'm aware you are much, much more advanced than me as a painter (either analog or digital, I don't know) so you're entitled to tell me you just don't want obvious light in your pieces! But, as a photographer, I just feel something's missing. |
Posted By: Jocher
Date Posted: 11 September 2009 at 6:06am
| so, i finished it but i post it later |
Posted By: Zeratanus
Date Posted: 11 September 2009 at 8:09am
| Man, Manupix took the time to post. The least you could do is acknowledge it. It's rude to just ignore someone like that. |
Posted By: Jocher
Date Posted: 11 September 2009 at 8:52am
| No, i dont ignore it. I dont post it because i do at first that what manu said |
Posted By: Manupix
Date Posted: 13 September 2009 at 7:45am
| And Jocher PMd me, so no problemo! |