Chick
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
URL: https://pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=931
Printed Date: 13 September 2025 at 4:52am
Topic: Chick
Posted By: Filax_666
Subject: Chick
Date Posted: 05 October 2005 at 2:21am
The first time i saw this lineart i knew i was made especially for me
 just jokin.
Heres the original lineart by ensellitis: 
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Posted By: Fugitive
Date Posted: 05 October 2005 at 2:59am
| It's not showing up for me.... |
Posted By: Filax_666
Date Posted: 05 October 2005 at 7:25am
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hum...what do you mean with that?you cant see the images or you
dont think its good? |
Posted By: Ensellitis
Date Posted: 05 October 2005 at 7:50am
I can't see them either. Of course DA hasn't been working for me at all today. Upload them to http://imagehost.ensellitis.com - http://imagehost.ensellitis.com . I really want to see what you have done with that lineart.  ------------- There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross. |
Posted By: Blueberry_pie
Date Posted: 05 October 2005 at 8:16am
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Yeah, DeviantART doesn't allow image hotlinking. Right clicking on them and selecting 'View image' in FireFox works though.
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Posted By: Ensellitis
Date Posted: 05 October 2005 at 8:20am
Not if your computer is being a retard and not letting you see anything from DA 
------------- There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross. |
Posted By: Filax_666
Date Posted: 05 October 2005 at 8:28am
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it only hapenned now! i could see them before...
s***, i feel so stupid... 
sorry guys...gimme just a lil bit to upload them from somewhere else... |
Posted By: Filax_666
Date Posted: 05 October 2005 at 8:43am
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hum...you can try seeing it at DA ( http://filax666.deviantart.com )
while i upload in Ensellitis imagehosting... sorry again 
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Posted By: Filax_666
Date Posted: 05 October 2005 at 8:49am
done...i hope you see it now.
This is all ive done so far, but i think im going the right way...im not sure about the hair and the aaing on the brown line though... Ensellitis: mind if keep using it to upload the other updates?or there is a image replacement/image edit option? |
Posted By: Ensellitis
Date Posted: 05 October 2005 at 8:56am
there is no edit/replace option. I may add that later. but
feel free to upload whatever you want, that's what i made it for. 
------------- There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross. |
Posted By: Filax_666
Date Posted: 05 October 2005 at 9:00am
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thanks
and what about the pic? is it good enough to match the beauty of the base lineart? |
Posted By: leel
Date Posted: 05 October 2005 at 12:51pm
| the hair is pretty good, but I think the body could do with some shading, darken the boob and the thigh of her 'kicking' leg... so far you only have a bit of highlights and it looks a bit plain |
Posted By: Filax_666
Date Posted: 05 October 2005 at 2:22pm
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i was already planing to da that, after finishing the highlights.
my bigest problem now is the hair...i think it looks too simple 
I would have advanced more today but i went to the cinema. "Charlie and the chocolate factory" is amazing! |
Posted By: Fugitive
Date Posted: 05 October 2005 at 3:45pm
It's looking good 
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Posted By: Ensellitis
Date Posted: 05 October 2005 at 5:49pm
It looks great so far. Just take some of leel's advice and it will look 100% better. 
------------- There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross. |
Posted By: Filax_666
Date Posted: 07 October 2005 at 1:43pm
didnt do much today...school keeps me busy 
Started the shading on the body and added a new shade on the face (and some other parts of the body).I also modified the hair a bit and added a new shade to it. Next thing i'll be doing is to finish the base shadows, add a second shadow (as I did with the arm) and also anti aliase whats needed... maybe the line of shadow i added on the back is too heavy  ...but
that why i posted this here! if you think this is the best thing you
ever saw (im sure it isnt) or if you think it sucks (lets hope it doesnt ) be sure to leave your opinion and (please...) say everything
that you think that will help to improve the piece, cause its relly needing... |
Posted By: PixelSnader
Date Posted: 07 October 2005 at 8:07pm
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i think you are trying to AA wronlgy on the outlines, because the pixels on the corners are lightened, where in usual aa (usually for transparency reasons) the cornerpixles are the darkest... ------------- ▄▄█ ▄▄█ ▄█▄ ▄█▄ |
Posted By: Filax_666
Date Posted: 08 October 2005 at 12:06am
| ok. i'll work on it. |
Posted By: Filax_666
Date Posted: 09 October 2005 at 2:32am
No major changes...I just added the second shadow and anti aliased all I thought that wasnt smoth enough... Any suggestions on what to do next
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Posted By: acrylicana
Date Posted: 09 October 2005 at 8:36am
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Good job so far. :D Suggestions? Maybe some more on her hair (her left side), and some slight medium shadow where the hair meets the back? |
Posted By: Filax_666
Date Posted: 09 October 2005 at 1:19pm
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thanks acrylicana you're right, i should really work on that
hair...it looks kinda s***ty... |
Posted By: Filax_666
Date Posted: 10 October 2005 at 12:55pm
I tried to soften the shading on the left part of the hair and I think its OK...but when I worked on the right side i totaly f***** it up... I think that after I finish the hair I'll consider it finished! |
Posted By: Pixel_Outlaw
Date Posted: 11 October 2005 at 7:42am
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Hmmm maybe a brunette? That way you coauld give the hair more color depth.
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Posted By: Filax_666
Date Posted: 11 October 2005 at 8:50am
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Im gonna feel so stupid now...what the hell is a brunette?
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Posted By: Amythist
Date Posted: 11 October 2005 at 10:33am
| brown hair ^.~ |
Posted By: Ensellitis
Date Posted: 11 October 2005 at 11:41am
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Originally posted by Pixel_Outlaw Hmmm maybe a brunette? That way you coauld give the hair more color depth. Destory a blonde??? Now you and I must fight to the death in the Thunder Pixel Dome!!!  ------------- There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross. |
Posted By: Filax_666
Date Posted: 11 October 2005 at 1:23pm
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Originally posted by Ensellitis
Destory a blonde??? Now you and I must fight to the death in the Thunder Pixel Dome!!!
Maybe I'll do both...that way I wouldnt destroy the blond and I would satisfy Oixel Outlaw's wish
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Posted By: Amythist
Date Posted: 11 October 2005 at 1:29pm
| perhaps you could put yourself upto a challenge of blonde streaks in brown hair. o.0' |
Posted By: Shark
Date Posted: 11 October 2005 at 1:36pm
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blondes have more fun :D
*admires blonde hair in mirror* |
Posted By: PixelSnader
Date Posted: 11 October 2005 at 3:37pm
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meh.. greens rule ------------- ▄▄█ ▄▄█ ▄█▄ ▄█▄ |
Posted By: Pixel_Outlaw
Date Posted: 11 October 2005 at 6:22pm
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Brunetts all the way. Only like my past four girlfriends. Blonds can be pretty to though.
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Posted By: Filax_666
Date Posted: 12 October 2005 at 10:15am
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Originally posted by Amythist
perhaps you could put yourself upto a challenge of blonde streaks in brown hair. o.0' Love the idea, I feel really tempted to try it, although i'm not sure i'm up to the challenge...
Originally posted by Pixel_Outlaw
Brunetts all the way. Only like my past four girlfriends. Blonds can be pretty to though. What a coincidence...its the same with me! |