Female Character Sprite
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 12 September 2025 at 7:57am
Topic: Female Character Sprite
Posted By: Adcrusher
Subject: Female Character Sprite
Date Posted: 25 December 2009 at 9:41pm
    I started this a couple days ago, and it would be nice to receive some crit. Please C+C  |
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Posted By: cure
Date Posted: 26 December 2009 at 2:55pm
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It's way too noisy in there, worry about defining the forms more than
adding details, especially at this stage. The anatomy needs work
(head/chest too large compared to rest, belly button too low, forearm
too short, face too... anime) I'm no anatomy expert but this should illustrate what I'm getting at:  sorry for the rough edit. also http://www.wayofthepixel.net/pixelation/index.php?topic=9590.msg104586#msg104586 - this thread came to mind when I saw your piece, maybe it can be of some help. idk I think the red-shirt version over at pixelation was much better. < id="gwProxy" ="">< ="jsCall();" id="jsProxy" =""> |
Posted By: smk
Date Posted: 26 December 2009 at 10:37pm
| Boobs were better in the original! |
Posted By: Pumpkinbot
Date Posted: 26 December 2009 at 11:21pm
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Originally posted by smk *smack*Boobs were better in the original! Anyway, I'm no expert on anatomy, but the head seems too big in comparison to the rest of the body. Also, the lower half of the arms should be lengthened. Both parts of the arm should be the same length. And, yes, it's too noisy. Look at the pants, for example. It doesn't really look folded; it merely looks...zigzagged. Google "baggy jeans" and you may get a good idea of how it should look. Other than that, it looks good! Keep it up!  |
Posted By: Adcrusher
Date Posted: 27 December 2009 at 12:15pm
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Thanks for all the critique guys! Alright I got an update:  I reduced the head size, and tried to lengthen the forearm. Those pants are hard to make  I still don't think they look right but I'm not sure. C+C please |
Posted By: Pumpkinbot
Date Posted: 27 December 2009 at 12:38pm
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Looks better, but the arms look too small (though that may be from comparison to the chest :P). When doing the pants shade it just like you did the shirt. I really like the hair and shading, though. |
Posted By: cure
Date Posted: 28 December 2009 at 12:31am
| arms indeed still need some work. can't tell what that hand is doing, or the far arm for that matter. watch that the legs don't bow, but have proper anatomy (thighs, shins) beneath the pants. watch her general form as well, as she has boy hips at the moment. Not diggin the hairstyle too much atm but that's a style thing I guess.< id="gwProxy" ="">< ="jsCall();" id="jsProxy" =""> |
Posted By: Agris
Date Posted: 28 December 2009 at 2:21pm
| I love pixeled bobbiesssss ;) plz make her with shoret panties :) |
Posted By: CaKsTeR
Date Posted: 28 December 2009 at 7:59pm
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Originally posted by Agris I love pixeled bobbiesssss ;) plz make her with shoret panties :) Relatively creepy  On topic; she looks slightly off balance, as if she were leaning forward. Looking good otherwise! |
Posted By: Adcrusher
Date Posted: 09 January 2010 at 11:13am
Hi! I got bored with this thread before so I took a little break. But now I'm ready to start working on this again! I tried redoing the shirt, stance, arms, hair, but these pants are really trolling me! I also took away the highlight on the shirt to make it look more red. please C+C! |
Posted By: Adcrusher
Date Posted: 24 January 2010 at 4:46pm
Alright, I think I'm finished with this unless somebody can give some crit   It's changed tons since I last posted here. People over on pixelation helped me. Thank you! |
Posted By: TMH
Date Posted: 24 January 2010 at 5:48pm
| wow, major improvement! |
Posted By: Pumpkinbot
Date Posted: 24 January 2010 at 7:04pm
| A lot better! |