Rocketship! AND CAKE!
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
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Printed Date: 12 September 2025 at 9:38pm
Topic: Rocketship! AND CAKE!
Posted By: Alienation
Subject: Rocketship! AND CAKE!
Date Posted: 23 February 2010 at 9:30pm
I am new here. These are my first pixel projects, so nothing too major. Erm.. C&C would be good.
  EDIT: I only have mspaint for windows xp. |
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Posted By: cure
Date Posted: 24 February 2010 at 12:34am
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program doesn't matter much. lots of people use mspaint, isn't optimal, but it's capable. rocket- very 2d. define the volumes better (learn to shade cylinder and other 3d shapes according to a set light source so the image has depth). all the noise isn't really helping either, too many colors and the application of detail looks a bit too gritty and doesn't really serve a purpose. cake- rather than a simple cylinder, maybe icing around the top and bottom edges? the dithering is hurting the piece atm, try for a smoother, creamier texture. candle looks more like an explosion than a calm flame. the text over the cake is a garish color and rather unattractive font that drags the whole piece down. and if it's for the Pixeljoint gallery, the text along the top and bottom of the image will have to be made by hand. |
Posted By: meagz
Date Posted: 24 February 2010 at 1:51am
| i cant even see the cake through the red mess... what does it even say? |
Posted By: Alienation
Date Posted: 24 February 2010 at 8:58am
| "No lies here" but I can remove it. |
Posted By: meagz
Date Posted: 27 February 2010 at 12:27am
| please do :) |