 | Ego @ 5/30/2009 6:31:48 PM commented on Scenes From the Future I really like the far background and the interface. The foreground, on the other hand, has a number of issues. The darkness on the floor is real sloppy, not at all the skillful look of the back. On the subject matters, I would do away with the black outlines, it makes it look flat against the depth of the picture. It might seem like it'll blend in a bit with the background, but some smart alternate-lighting highlight could really help that. The brain's lineart is not at all good(sorry if sounds offensive, but I would recommend just redoing it and it's wires entirely). On the brain's machine, darken it all a little bit, with the highlights on only the most extreme edges.
May I add though that aside from the all black on back leg, your use of the light source on it is expert.
All in all, you're pretty good at this. You just need a little bit of refinement. Good luck in the challenge, I just may vote for you.
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 | Ego @ 4/8/2009 8:04:37 PM commented on Chalumette / Caluminate Need origins for Caluminate? Well, cal could be caldera(crater of a volcano) and luminate could be illuminate(glowing, giving off light). Both parts are kind of fire related.
Spritewise and designwise, they're great. I like much.
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 | Ego @ 4/4/2009 8:22:38 PM commented on Commander Great job, you fooled me! I like the last one(with halberd & shield) the most.
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 | Ego @ 3/16/2009 3:28:51 PM commented on Milky Dilky Reminds me of Bisques work. That's a good thing.
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 | Ego @ 3/12/2009 10:57:00 PM commented on 0² (revised) Thanks for the mention :D.
And here's a fav for all your work. You have my vote sir.
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 | Ego @ 2/9/2009 9:16:02 PM commented on Mayan Statue Redux I very much so understand what you're saying about the steps, I hadn't thought of that. I can fix that. The light source isn't actually behind the pyramid I guess, even though that's what I said. From the way I made it, it should be over the pyramid off to the left of the image, but that would make the top of the pyramid be fully lit. I'll do that. Thanks much.
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 | Ego @ 12/10/2008 11:45:15 PM commented on Lost Forest I really like it, but I think you should probably put the reference in the description. Nice job :).
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 | Ego @ 11/26/2008 6:29:42 PM commented on happy gnome He almost looks like he could be jump-roping. Its really cute. I can't critique too well with Firefox 3 well, but you should try removing the outline of the hand where it meets the arm. You know, let the wrist connect? Just an idea.
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 | Ego @ 10/22/2008 6:08:43 PM commented on Shawn's Lineart Why thank you. I appreciate it.
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 | Ego @ 7/8/2008 10:12:48 AM commented on Luso - Final Fantasy Tactics A2 I love it (and the game), but I think the hat should use a bit more contrast.
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 | Ego @ 7/3/2008 3:28:35 PM commented on adarias's lines colored Its most problematic to do that here on PJ, because the different themes make outer AA a risky move. Suggestions?
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 | Ego @ 6/25/2008 10:44:48 AM commented on Game Boy Mockup 2 - goblins in a dungeons I like it, seems like it could be a real game! But how do you get into the room?
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 | Ego @ 5/9/2008 10:17:43 PM commented on Pixel - CreamPunk The brown under the buttons reads as the background, making the part on our right seem like her left arm, not simply the other side of the dress. Also, just checking that you know her left breast is jaggy.
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| | Ego @ 4/24/2008 8:54:44 PM commented on CRAZY FAT CLOWN Would coloring someone elses lineart that they posted elsewhere for the intention of use count as a collaboration? I'm not counting not crediting them, cuz that's stealing.
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 | Ego @ 4/18/2008 9:04:03 PM commented on BAB Dragon 11 Its on Pixeltendo, but here it is: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v410/badassbill123/dragon_lineart.png Have fun :).
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 | Ego @ 4/17/2008 6:25:28 PM commented on BAB Dragon 11 Um, how do I get RID of the detail image?
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 | Ego @ 4/17/2008 5:31:55 PM commented on BAB Dragon 11 Oops, I'll fix that.
It sure should. A couple years ago, in order to get into the tournament, we had to shade and color that dragon. I just know that I havn't stopped since. :)
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 | Ego @ 4/5/2008 11:06:59 AM commented on BAB Dragon Take 10 Thank you very much.
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 | Ego @ 4/5/2008 11:05:23 AM commented on BAB Dragon Take 10 How so? Finding a middle ground color to blend? Pleas tell me. But thank you very much :).
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 | Ego @ 4/3/2008 9:04:30 PM commented on BAB Dragon Take 10 I agree. I was just excited to get it posted. Preview has been changed to something much more justice-doing. I THINK that comment was compliment, so thank you.
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 | Ego @ 1/16/2008 8:45:57 PM commented on Mushroom Thank you very much, glad you like it.
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 | Ego @ 9/17/2007 9:19:56 PM commented on adarias's lines colored Thanks! Yeah, I don't really mind the lance, I just couldn't think of a better way to do it. Updated. Leg still looks off, but the twisting is throwing me off.
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 | Ego @ 9/17/2007 2:52:20 PM commented on Arachne's lines colored Sure thing. I got both out of the pixelation line art thread btw.
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 | Ego @ 9/17/2007 2:51:35 PM commented on adarias's lines colored Well, skin tones have always been a problem for me. I tried a bunch, but this looked best. I'll keep trying.
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 | Ego @ 9/17/2007 2:50:12 PM commented on adarias's lines colored Thanks you, and I'll try for a background.
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