If you're looking to get feedback and improve, I recommend posting in the WIP forum rather than in the gallery. Since the gallery is for finished works, people are less inclined to give critique.
The torso motion here reads nicely, but the legs do not. Why are they bending at the ankle, and why are they bending outward? When people walk, they generally put one leg a bit in front of the other and shift their weight onto that front leg. Your character's leg motion doesn't have that, and the character appears to be leaning into the leg that is raised rather than the one that is on the ground.
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If you're looking to get feedback and improve, I recommend posting in the WIP forum rather than in the gallery. Since the gallery is for finished works, people are less inclined to give critique.
The torso motion here reads nicely, but the legs do not. Why are they bending at the ankle, and why are they bending outward? When people walk, they generally put one leg a bit in front of the other and shift their weight onto that front leg. Your character's leg motion doesn't have that, and the character appears to be leaning into the leg that is raised rather than the one that is on the ground.