Out of the Abyss

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Out of the Abyss



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Title: Out of the Abyss
Pixel Artist: Fleja2003  (Level 5 Detective :: 3434 points)
Posted: 3/18/2017 22:29
Palette: 14 colors
Statistics:  13 comments    41 faves    0 avatars

Just some Pixel art of my OC Fleja. Took me about 6 days to make. 

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Fleja2003 (Level 5 Detective) @ 9/28/2017 06:38

Thanks so much for really taking the time to give feedback!
this is a pretty old drawing haha - but I still appreciate the critque because it still adds to my knowledge of does and donts.
Thanks again!
 


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jok (Level 10 Master Sniper) @ 9/27/2017 10:04

Ok, as you wish :)

Main issues for me:

- there is no real difference between background and portrait - alltogether it looks flat (I know how hard is add space to picture with only 14 colors, but still) - everthing on the same lvl of contrast, intensity, importance (in gfx meaning)

- style and anathomy - while hand and sword try to looks 3d and semirealistic  - face is treated very comic (manga) and unrealistic way - it causes incoherence. especially with this rich detail shading style

- this blue thing on head - I don't get it - seriously, looks like dead bird to me :)

- last thing, composition - too centered for sure,  I would say even - too heavy on right side. With portraits I believe is better to leave some air on side where person stare. Or give 'heavy' element on left side to make it better balanced.


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Fleja2003 (Level 5 Detective) @ 9/26/2017 16:01

Thank you for your compliments and subtle critiques! I plan on making more drawings like these in the future - so I welcome all criticism - you can share your criticism as i will greatly appreciate it for future reference!


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jok (Level 10 Master Sniper) @ 9/26/2017 14:39

interesting - very carefully done on pixel side (although I thing dither is overused) many elements nice to look at.

- on drawing/composition side, there are more issues...

Anyway - good work


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Fleja2003 (Level 5 Detective) @ 8/1/2017 10:39

Thank you!


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d9nis (Level 5 Assistant Manager) @ 7/30/2017 16:41

colors are marvelously psychedelic! :D


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Fleja2003 (Level 5 Detective) @ 3/23/2017 12:41

Thank all of you guys - I feel this is one of my best pieces :)


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Julius Cesarius (Level 1 Thug) @ 3/21/2017 06:40

Beautiful colors & beautiful drawing.


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emocx (Level 1 Gangster) @ 3/19/2017 14:13

such detail, wonderful!


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xxmantisxx (Level 7 Mass Murderer) @ 3/19/2017 04:45

Absolutely beautiful!


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Theoden (Level 6 SWAT) @ 3/19/2017 02:30

Good stuff.


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Mega_19 (Level 5 Assistant Manager) @ 3/19/2017 00:54

nicely done.


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TRUEvector (Level 5 Sniper) @ 3/18/2017 23:49

What a wonderfull, a magnificent feast of colours and shades! Spectaculous!


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