thanks i'm really glad you like it!
im still new to this whole thing and i still have problems with a lot of stuff but i will try to get better.
thanks for the suggestions

Welcome!  And great work!   I do like it.  Nice use of transparency and even a cute little animation to top it off.   The only suggestion I've got has to do with color consolidation.  You've got 27 colors, which isn't necessarily out of the question, but a few of them, when zoomed at 1x are pretty indistinguishable from one another.  The eyes are where I see the closest hues in question, but you could argue a few others if you're absolutely trying to be picky about the whole thing.  Here's the PJ image specs on your piece.  You can use it for any of your pieces to check color counts and little particulars about your submissions by putting the url in the box and hitting submit.

I can't wait for your next submission!