This is a background of one of several amateur adventure games I am making. It is titled The Family Treasure 2, a sequel to the first one. You play with the girl ... in the game.
[edit] Changed the clouds and the girl's eyes.
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There seems to be a stray black pixel amonst the rocks. I love this style buloght, and you do it brilliantly. Your games are also fantastic, can't wait for this one!
For some bizarre reason whenever I look at tis image, my eyes immedaitely focus on the tree. I think this is in part due to how well the tree is drawn and shaded.
I would have to agree with the whole "Cloud Movement" - just one more shade would have done the trick. A very soft grey.
High quality in every aspect. I too join the "shade for the clouds". I wouldn't say so if the tree with its intricacies were not touching them. <3 + fav'd
Two notes about the glasses: 1) They look transparent at a moment cause you're using the same color on them as in the background. 2) They usually don't bend that much around your head. Well back in the times they actually did but nevertheless I think they probably would look better if you make the left lens one pixel wider.
Oh and I think you should simplify the eyes of the girl a little. At a moment they look kinda... weird. Otherwise great job!
Many thanks bb I did have the hook pointer black outlined, but it felt a little too out there, maybe a very dark red colour outline? Thanks for your comment!
Only two niggles from perfect in my mind -- the leaves seem to be rounder (with more shading) than anything else in the scene and the hook could use a black outline so it stands out.
Well, the characters are intentionally made simplistic with no shading. I want a simplistic style for the game, influenced by DOTT. That's why the bg itself isn't too shaded.
Thanks for the kind compliments and critique. I was thinking with going with more shaded clouds, but in the end I sort of liked the simplistic-ness. I'll rethink this though.
I love it! The clouds need a little more shading though... and the girls eyes are just a bit weird. The tree and the rocks are really really awesome. Great job, mate.
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