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Omg... that is amazing... I'm literally speechless. I wish I had some advice but I have no room ro speak... so this one is a faviorite.
maybe a more 3D model may help?
Maybe these may help?
http://louis.new21.net/skin/makeup/_Louis_AC_01ElfEars_01s.jpg
http://images.google.com/images?svnum=10&hl=en&lr=&q=elf+ears+front
1) the rocky background was semi rushed, but I was afraid if i detailed dithered it it would be too sharp against the forground. I may edit this after your comments.
2) The ear, (on kiera specifically) pissed me off to no extent. I think i drew it completely wrong. I gave up after a while. I like tyes ear, but not kieras, If anyone has better advice then "I dont like it" I would appreciate it ^_^ Its easier to improve when someone can actually provide a useful critique with a method or reference for improvement XD
3) I didnt animated anything but the waterfall because if I animated the grass, people would bitch that the hair on the characters wasnt animated, and it escalates from there. The way I saw it, is water can run, without wind blowing. I liked the look, and found it calming and that it helped to even out the image, This will not change.
4) I may add more lighting to the edges of their cheekbones after the comments, Thank you -- Space2 -- for your critique.
5) Thank you all for the advice, I will apply it toward my next projects.
Excellent and impressive work. My only qualm with it is the girl's ear. for some reason it looks flat and 2 dimensional in contrast with everything else. Ears seem to be difficult for you in many aspects, especially elf ears. Is it the lack of a 3D model for elf ears?
Anway, this piece is very well done and impressive. I'm always impressed by you skin shading and dithering.
very, very nice. the only thing i have an issue with is how you shaded the guy on the right's jacket or whatever.
your male drawings have improved greatly from some of your older pieces.
also, dont be afraid to do some things with hard edged highlights, especially on noses and cheekbones. right now all light on the faces is evenly blended.
Wow ... another fantastic art piece you made Jaeden ! I see no flaws in there ! Bravo !
+fav