Ha Kaede

Ha Kaede

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Ha Kaede



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Title: Ha Kaede
Pixel Artist: zehapplesaucers  (Level 1 Rookie :: 16 points)
Posted: 5/21/2009 21:34
Statistics:  6 comments    1 faves    0 avatars

Well, this is a doll made with one of my own bases (which I might upload after some CC on this one). I've been roaming around PJ for a little while and I was like, "What the heck? Why not? MOST of them seem like honest people." I know my work is lacking incredibly based on the amazing pieces here, so hit me with your best CC!!! I'm a big girl! (and I am looking forward to be more than just being a 'doller', but I have to start somewhere, right?)

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Mathias (Level 7 Junk) @ 5/29/2009 14:43

That's awesome. Let it rip!


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zehapplesaucers (Level 1 Rookie) @ 5/22/2009 21:59

@Mathis

Thank you so much for the advice. I really appreciate it. I keep what you have said in mine while practicing. You really pumped me up to go out of my comfort zone.


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Mathias (Level 7 Junk) @ 5/22/2009 12:48

*LAUNCH*

K, I'm messing with you, I'm not trying to Nagasaki you, but here's some crit for your trouble.

She has the appearance of a dissheveled lady of the night. Must be the messy hair and hastily applied makeup. Her arms looks like spaghettie noodles - they seem to bend inhumanly. Is the lack of hands due to her being chibi? It's not working. She seems to be missing them. It's actually one of the first things I picked out. She has feet, why not hands? Granted, they're just nubs, but still, Zeh. Those knees don't work for me either, they end up aiding the perception that the legs are just non-tapered tubes. Shading is rather unexciting. Light source seems ambiguous.

I hope this is just the beginning to a long successful pixelling career for you. I'd recommend deviating from dolls and bases as soon as possible though. Creativity and growth stunters they are. And I admit I don't get the attraction to dolls and bases.


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zehapplesaucers (Level 1 Rookie) @ 5/22/2009 09:26

@jalanso

I changed the preview pic and thank you very much for the CC. With this, I can go tweak my bases. I seriously thought this would be soul crushing... ha! lol. And I may feel like some sort of demented goupie by saying this, but I want to just pour all your work into a pool and marinate in it, hoping that I can soak up all of your talent. You're pure genius to me.


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Mathias (Level 7 Junk) @ 5/22/2009 07:12

*PREPARING CC ATOMIC BOMB OF DESTRUCTION AND MORALE CRUSHING DEFEAT OF THE UTMOST EFFECTIVE RADIOACTIVE AURA OF PWNAGE DEATH SWIRLING HARBINGER OF CHAOS AND ANNIHILATING DOOM TO THE NTH DEGREE* . . .


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jalonso (Level 11 Godfather) @ 5/22/2009 06:58

Welcome :)

Its cute. Sometimes we have issues with dolls because of the base 'issue' its not always easy to judge the art when you must seperate what is from the base and what has been created from them. Using your own bases is always best. Like most 'dollers' you do over pixel but not as much as most seem to do. The jawline is a bit jaggy, watch for stuff like that in the future.

Your preview file is weird looking. Why choose that section of the art? When PJ members are looking at new art, the preview file should tempt one to click to view the art and rate/comment/fav/etc. Having an inviting preview file is crucial. You can always update this by clicking the 'edit details' up there ^ and change it by uploading a new one.


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