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The shading is a little strange. her legs look really weirdly shaped too. Its almost as if she should be climbing up a wall or something. I would add more colors and dither less as well. The sprite at the top right looks nice though.
Everything looks good to me but the skins shading...(big character).... it just looks bad... Though everything but the shading there looks good =)
Not bad at all .. But i think , her arm get a little short :( .. ^^ ..
Excellent job! I really like this! The only complaint I have is on the boots. They seem much less detailed than the rest of it, which sort of sets it off.
Other than that its incredible!
Thanks for the post and the .gif onek, i changed the colors down to 19 colors, because with less colors he destroys the image too much.
I did'nt know, that the color palettes are so important, but i i'll try to learn more about them.
i like the sprite.... maybe add some more facial expression, but still fine, the big character is quite nice aswell, lineart is good, but coloring and shading could be better, you used like 55 colors, try to conserve colors and use more intresting palettes (hue shifts, etc), palettes are essential in pixel art, try to learn a bit about them so that u can reduce them to the limit, instead of adding one shade after the other for each color u use....the contrast is too low imo, with higher contrast its also easier to do proper shading, since it looks very pillowish now
heres a quick edit with 7colors only and some shading corrections....
http://i992.photobucket.com/albums/af45/oooonek/girl-1.gif
Erm, i think you get me wrong.^^
I designed a naked character template and use this for all the character sets, like the small one in the corner.
If you want to see the template, here is a link of the thread where i had post them.
I'm guessing you're using RPG Maker XP or something to make this game of yours?
The smaller character in the upper right corner, you used a base for that right?
And the bigger character resembles a doll base. It's fine to use these, but don't forget to give credit.
Your concept design is pretty interesting, she reminds me of Valkyrie Profile game characters.
i would work more on the shading, right now it looks way too pillowshaded and the palette overall needs either a bit more saturation. as it is now, it looks as if the character was made out of cream.