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Top Pixel Art - February 2011 (#8)
Você é o melhor JinnPixel, continue assim e serás um ótimo design, você já é. 
Wow, you've really come a LONG way. This is awesome. Great job! I love your texturing and colors.
Sinceramente, voce e uma maquina. Sem palavras, apenas um clique em favoritar.
Nice improvement (on the leg). It was exactly what I was talking about in my first post! Big improvement.
I dont know if its just me but I dont really like the colors on the limbs of the bull :/
Oooh, you hid text in the highlights of the horns! Tricky, tricky.
Jinn na pixelaria pude descobrir que você fez de fato computação grafica,mas que nao aprendeu muuuita coisa xD Como voce se ESPECIALIZOU nesse ramo?
{ Whoa, I love it, Kaiseto! I'm going to fix it right now.
And maybe you can help me with the right arm as well, I tried a lot to make it right, but i'm not seeing whats wrong. It just don't feel right.
Anyway, thanks for the edit, it's gonna be really useful! 
[edit] And here it is! Hope it's better now ^^
Your coloring and understanding of pixelart techniques are amazing, to the point where I'm a little jealous. I especially like the dithering used here on the Tauren's legs and clothing. It gives the piece a very nice, smooth feel at a glance.
However, I do have to agree with Helm in some ways. I think you might want to spend some more time working on anatomy and lineart. As someone who does creatures with digitigrade legs a lot, I made a quick overlay to show some edits I'd make to the Tauren's leg: dl.dropbox.com/u/740653/JinnEdit.png . I'm obviously not a master of anatomy myself, but I think the big things to note is that there should be another segment of leg between the kneecap and the ankle, and the legs can get the same treatment you gave to the arms for muscles. Taurens are pretty beefy characters.
{ I understand your point of view, Helm. But I'm not calling it done, I know it can be better, and I always listen to critics to fix and improve.
I also try to find as many references as I can, even for anatomy or shading. And this sketch was from 3~4 years ago, maybe I can do better now, but I wanted to finish it the way it is.
This is my way to be, I don't like to left unfinished projects behind.
But I really apreciate your attention. I'm glad you think I can become a better artist. And I'll try.
I agree with Helm, those words are very wise! Although this piece does look really nice :)
atleast he has improved his work greatly the last 2-3 years.
Hi Jinn... you post a lot of artwork and there's a lot of merit to it. However It would benefit you to slow down and to start learning anatomy and shading, there's not-obvious problems with your artwork that will not solve themselves by just making more and more. And being told that what you do is perfect, here, might be unhealthy in your process of becoming a better artist.
Hey Jinn, heres a small edit, hope you know what i mean now ;).
http://kalangoworks.files.wordpress.com/2011/02/jinnedit.png
C num vai postar o process não? Queria ver mano xD.
This is nice.
Aside from the area everybody is mentioning, my eye was caught (just a bit) on Tauren's [visible] leg. The connection behind the knee to the lower-leg feels missing to me. Like the lower-leg is floating back there.
Minor though. I love the pic. Great colors and mood! Nice to see something "big" from you too!
The boy could use wider shoulders (and chest) and a less rigid necklace, imo. seconding the missing forearm crit. where is the elbow, and from there, where is the forearm? boy's chin seems odd/ambigous as well. hand's relationship to the book is uncertain and doesn't seem well-planned.
despite all my crits, I think it's a nice piece. lovely palette and nice work on the tauren's hair.
Wow 
I love the texture on hair and fur (speciaully on the Tauren's face) aswell as the texture on his clothes and nice looking belt.
YOU are amazing Jinn (: and hopefully one day i get to be as good! 
{ Would you mind to help me with it? ...maybe an edit? I tried a lot to fix it.
Anyway. thanks guys! ^^
the tauren arm seems a bit displaced. Other than that the image looks pretty awesome as usual man. Congrats.
OMG this is epic, colors, textures and everything! Congrats mann! Keep it up!
Aha! So that's why you weren't submitting anything for such a long time!
Amazing piece, Jinn. It shows how much you've improved over the years.
There's only one thing, a 50%/50% dither pattern you use to buffer between two of the fur shade, consistently. It looks as if you had to remove one intermediate color.
The comparison with the older one is stunning.
It's nice and really shows how you've improved, my only crit really is that Jin's leg reads as part of the tauren at first glance
That is absolutly amazing as always
This pixel art demonstrate how much you have improve from the previous version of this one its amazing dude
but wheres the WIp =[ loll
{ So what do you suggest, Manx? I would love to see an edit from you!
And thanks Pandora!
Not sure if the dithering on the taurens knee is working, but it doesn't really matter seeing at how awesome the rest is!
NICE!, great progress over the years! great colors as always too.
I can see an issue on the right arm of Tauren , the forearm from this position should be visible in parts, but I only see the hand. Apart from that is really nice work, as always
Good