A gift for Ruby

A gift for Ruby

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A gift for Ruby



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Title: A gift for Ruby
Pixel Artist: H|F  (Level 1 Jukyu :: 631 points)
Posted: 7/12/2013 00:23
Palette: 34 colors
Statistics:  8 comments    0 faves    0 avatars

Made as a gift for a friend.

Color count is higher on this one then I would normally make it but again it was a gift and not for me.

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H|F (Level 1 Jukyu) @ 1/17/2014 20:25

Yes actually! Very helpful thanks a bunch! 


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Shadow64 (Level 2 Hired Gun) @ 1/17/2014 19:32

What Peyton is referring to is that the jeans are creating an illusion of her hips being too wide on the right side (her left). In the drawing you posted, the red line is very smooth and looks great, however in the final piece, the jeans are much further out than the line you drew. As Peyton states, you can see it in the version you posted - the jeans are decently outside the natural line of the hip and because her arm is blocking it, it creates an illusion that her hip goes that far too, when that's clearly not what you intended.

What I'm saying is if she were to move her arm, I imagine there would be a bit of space between her jeans and her hips - which is fine if she's wearing loose jeans, but on the left side (her right) they hug her close, and on the right side (her left) they don't. Hope this helps you see what he was getting at.


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H|F (Level 1 Jukyu) @ 7/13/2013 22:04

Oh I thought you said giant legs? Well I do tend to be very dramatic in the shape of hips lol


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Peyton (Level 7 Assassin) @ 7/12/2013 21:39

Pretty much, her hips are too wide, you can even see it in the drawing you have there


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H|F (Level 1 Jukyu) @ 7/12/2013 21:35

That isn't helping me to see what you are seeing? You just drew something that isn't even in the same pose?

Please look at this to help you understand what I see, http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p152/zeejaxx/redlines-2.png

If you could actually show me what you mean with my drawing it would be more helpful.


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Peyton (Level 7 Assassin) @ 7/12/2013 15:16

Well, pretty much from the stomach down is off.

It makes her figure look like if she stood, she would look like this shape.

http://i.cubeupload.com/sLf2Ds.png


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H|F (Level 1 Jukyu) @ 7/12/2013 13:48

lmao giant is kind of too much I think. They aren't skinny but over sized, I don't see what you are seeing?

 

Can you possibly make redlines to show me so I can maybe fix it if it is wrong?


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Peyton (Level 7 Assassin) @ 7/12/2013 10:31

The legs do not match the top half of the body.

It is like she has a normal body, then giant legs


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