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Better!
I would have used a lighter tone for the shadow though.
Thank you kindly for your feedback! I've gone back and modified the cloth around her waist/thighs and just extended her dress instead, I can see how the pink cloth could raise eyebrows LOL. I didn't touch her arms yet, I have a feeling they may be getting lost in her vuluptuous hair X3 I hope I didn't over overboard with the shadow, but I did add one.
Again, thank you very much! C&C always appreciated, respected, and omnomnommed by my brain!
This is nice =)
There's a readability issue with that skin-colored thing around the hips (part of the dress?), and the arms / hands which I didn't see for a long while.
The clusters on the face could be a little polished, esp the large highlight.
A hint of cast shadow on the ground might help.
I was kind of thinking that, like the lighter purple used to shade the hair? Imma try that like right now. Aaannnnnd done!