It's ok it's not my first language either! 

For the eyes have you tried a blue which would contrast more with the white of his eyes? They are both very pale so it makes it difficult for the eyes to differenciate them. Just a suggestion. 

kinda, i actually was more focus on the legs and arms but i think i still have some problems doing the hands.

the eyes? yes no much that i could do, i was difficult to make em look nice, but ill try to make them better!

(sorry if you dont understand something. its  just that english is not my first language)

I like the colors. Your shading is also nice to look at. The eyes are unfortunately harder to read and could be improved upon. Did you use any reference?