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I'd agree with HMC. The right side of the island is devoid of anything, whereas the left side is teeming with detail. Even making the outline of the right side more detailed would give some sense of finality to this piece. Right now, the right side of the island is nothing but a blob. Also, where is the reflection on the right side of the lighthouse coming from, if the moon is in back of it? I don't see any effect of the moonlight on the structure.
From what I see now, you demonstrate a pretty full mastery of the pallette, especially on the left side of the island. I think you need to juice that right side up with some detail and tweak it a bit.