looks good, but it might not make it to that gallery, as it isn't very controlled, and falls into "oekaki" (used around here to mean pixel sketches) as opposed to polished pixel art. I hope your other 1bit piece gets in at least, because there isn't really another way to get expressionistic line in pixel art without losing a bit of control.
I'll keep that in mind for next time. I'm still crazy new to pixel art in general, let alone terms and site requirements :p
Thanks!