	InnerRayg @ 10/25/2007 14:39 commented on Stoffen and Boris Super Dinosaur Comic Adventure Animation Oh come on, he's not that hard to find :P I love the look of the brontosaurus, but the Stegasaurus in the second panel seems very undefined...the shading may need to be redone, or just give him some more bone structure like in his face. It's kind of blobby.
	InnerRayg @ 10/22/2007 00:09 commented on Avatar My bad, I'm always lazy about my backgrounds...I didn't...uh...what's that word...oh yes, "Try" :P Fixed and reuploaded.
	InnerRayg @ 10/4/2007 16:57 commented on South square The style is made all the better by the fact that I couldn't even being to comprehend how to accomplish this-be it in Pixel Art or utilizing filters. Heck, I wish I could do this with a filter, let alone by hand.
	InnerRayg @ 10/4/2007 16:55 commented on CherryPie I hate pie, but I love your pixel work. The cream seems a little odd, but the crust and fruit is excellent!
	InnerRayg @ 10/3/2007 16:41 commented on Magma Ball Needs just a little more brightness on the tops of the towers. I like it though, reminds me of the old Magic: The Gathering Cards.
	InnerRayg @ 10/3/2007 16:35 commented on Second Works I think you need to change the background color, because I can't tell what is going on with the head or the weaponry since it looks like their colors are nearly the same as the background.
	InnerRayg @ 10/3/2007 16:34 commented on Room 101 Hmm...are the Telescreens really that big? Besides, if that were really room 101 shouldn't it have the torture devices Winston had to endure? (Rats?) It looks more like the prison cell he was held in prior, which is very cool.
	InnerRayg @ 10/3/2007 16:07 commented on Aching Hunger I like the feeling you're invoking here, but that raised divot in the shadowed area bothers me. The lighter area on the top of the dark hill might also benefit from some dithering
	InnerRayg @ 10/3/2007 16:06 commented on What ya staring at!? The wings look way too low on the character, they seem to be extending from the middle of his lower midection, rather then from the elbow blades, where wings affixed on bipeds are usually placed. It might just be a stylistic thing, but generally I think the effect you're going for would be better achieved if it was moved up. Also thinking the torso in general is way too long...to keep it in proportion with general Sonic style and to make it look right you should shorten it.
	InnerRayg @ 10/3/2007 16:03 commented on Carnivac Avatar Personally I like it a lot, it brings me back to my days of Transformers. The only thing I would have done was perhaps put a bit more emphasis on the eyes...you know, the cliche'd glowing thing or something. Or perhaps a small animation of the sun reflecting off of the gun or something. Just ideas I wanted to bounce off you, not meant as critique :P
	InnerRayg @ 9/25/2007 03:30 commented on Halo "Ghost" Vehicle Oh...no, not praise. Now I can never post anything again, because I'll have to match it up to this quality :P But I do appreciate the sentiments of course.
	InnerRayg @ 9/23/2007 09:15 commented on Overload logo Ah, that should work out better.
	InnerRayg @ 9/23/2007 08:52 commented on Overload logo I dunno, I think that it doesn't quite stick out enough....it really depends on what kind of background you plan to put it on. If it's going to be on black like this the text is too small and dark to be really noticeable. Not sure how it could be fixed, just my advice.
	InnerRayg @ 9/23/2007 08:51 commented on Floppy Disk Yeah, I get what you're doing with the text, and it's a cool idea, but it does break the style you have going on the Floppy. It's pretty awesome otherwise though.
	InnerRayg @ 9/23/2007 00:12 commented on Havoc Zone Title Yeah, I'm not a big fan of the eye, but the metal and text is absolutely stunning.