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TubularTink @ 10/30/2017 12:54 commented on wibble wobble

The colors are really nice, good work!



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TubularTink @ 10/30/2017 12:30 commented on Apple1

No problem! Keep up the good work! I look forward to seeing more of your art. :)



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TubularTink @ 10/30/2017 11:52 commented on Lime-Slime Lennox Lancer

Nice work, I love the colors and the animation looks nice and smooth. The only issue I have is that the ear seems to be vibrating and doesn't flow as well as the rest of the body. Other than me being a stickler, I think this is a really good piece. :)



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TubularTink @ 10/30/2017 11:49 commented on Apple1

Hi there!

First of all, I'd like to say that you did a nice job on this piece. However, there are a few things that you can improve upon. With smaller sprites, too many colors can be distracting to the eyes, and that seems to be the case here. I'd say that for a sprite this small, you should only use between 4-6 colors. Pick a few that go well together, and use them in a creative way.

Another thing I notice is that the apple seems to be disproportioned on the right side. I'm not sure if that was intended, as in, the view of the apple is from a certain angle, but making sure both sides are the same makes it look nicer. That way people can say "That's a nice apple!" instead of "It looks a bit lopsided."

Overall, I'd give this piece a 7/10. Nice work!