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quakis @ 2/9/2018 08:58 commented on The Pixel Art Hobbyist

Really like this one and the character design looks similar to the style that I enjoy drawing characters in! Loving the face too especially those thick lashes and brows, brings out the expression. Also good work on convincing, clean monitor images despite the limited space there.

The only nitpick that immediately comes to mind; I think her arm holding the pen should drop downward and appear more limp, reduce the overall bend from shoulder to wrist which is creating some tension in the arm. Feels off to me considering the sleeping context.

Keeping an eye on your future pieces.