Haha fair enough x) Still really nice though!!

Hey! Going off what Nightmare said about the anatomy, I think the biggest issue is the torso area.The shape of the body itself looks like it should be forward facing, but the detail of the stomach making it seem as though you wanted her to be leaning to the side I think? You might want to think about having her right waist (our left) curve in much more, and her left stick out accordingly so her stomach looks more like its in the middle from that angle : )

Also I think maybe the 'knees' of the fish tail could possibly be improved? The way I personally would go about it is by sketching out regular human legs first and then drawing over it to get the shape right. As it is the top section seems to go on for too long, and it kinda sticks out at the joint which looks a bit odd.

But really nice colouring work! I really like the way you shaded the clouds in particular, it looks really effective

ps. if none of what I said makes sense tell me and i can redline : }

 haha yeah you're definitely right about the grass thing : > background interacton with the character is scary for me ; _; but im working on it hehe

thanks a bunch!!

 Thanks again : ))

I'll work on my obsessive compulsive dithering then haha x)

 Thanks for the comment!!

Yeah this is an older piece so there's a whole bunch of issues with it, and you're right about the depth thing for sure 8 ))

thanks a lot for the advice, I might rework it or perhaps just redraw it all together haha

 This is a really cute character design!! I especially love the mask * v*

 I really love the colour contrast!!

 This is super cute!!

 I really like the colouring of this, especially the highlights of the chest and the glowing crack in the sword, that's a really cool touch 8 ))

i think for me the pose could be a little more dynamic, maybe? just a casual standing pose seems maybe a bit too ordinary for a super scary demon haha. also the sword doesnt appear to be very heavy, I think maybe if you altered it so the shoulder and arm holding the sword were leaning down some more? Or if the weapon was touching the floor that would give it more support I think e ue 

but I really like it!! so metal haha

 This is somehow ridiculously adorable *U*

Gosh thank you ;0;