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Shen-Gaussen @ 9/1/2014 09:29 commented on Samurai attack

It looks really nice, i would be great if the background was more detailed. Adding one more shade of gray would change A lot.

Looking at the animation itself it would be nice if it had more inbetweens.



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Shen-Gaussen @ 9/1/2014 09:25 commented on ALONNE

This is amazing, i can't find any things that i wouldn't like about it except that it is made out of fat pixels.

It could only be better if those fat pixels were replaced with Four pixels to add more detail.



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Shen-Gaussen @ 9/1/2014 09:18 commented on A City Night Shrouded in Fog

Looking at this piece i can say that you need to focus on improving a couple things;

  1. First is adding more detail, this looks very bland at the moment. If you focused on adding more unique bits and pieces to this you would earn a rating of Three from me
  2. Next is eliminating the grid. This looks like something from an NES game, everything looks too square, if you changed it up a bit you would have a rating of Four
  3. Lastly you need to improve your dithering, try to get more patterns going before you reach the other color. This would give it a complete rating of Five

At this point i can only give you a measly rating of Two