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Lucaiver @ 9/20/2016 17:32 commented on Super Toaster X: The Ad.

You can edit the uploaded files if you need to



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Lucaiver @ 9/18/2016 17:19 commented on Scrafty

Yeah, it's one of my faves (:



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Lucaiver @ 9/12/2016 13:32 commented on Bull Walk animation

It's so cute! And well animated 



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Lucaiver @ 9/8/2016 14:37 commented on My Avatar

I think the style is cute and well done! The colors could be improved upon, especially the outline that is black and brown. I think it could work together technically, but it looks weird to me right now. Keep it up! (:



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Lucaiver @ 8/31/2016 14:23 commented on Uninspired Room

Wow it looks like a gradient, but yeah it's 17 colors. If it's for building your own house is the gradient overlayed on the floor you choose? Seems like it would be hard to tile



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Lucaiver @ 8/31/2016 14:19 commented on rest in this

This is horrifying O__O



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Lucaiver @ 8/31/2016 14:16 commented on Weird forest

The only thing I don't really like is the trunks on the tall trees, otherwise I like it! (: Maybe there are a couple issues, but I wouldn't say it's ugly.



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Lucaiver @ 8/29/2016 12:47 commented on Sewer Tiles

I trust your judgment more than mine haha. I still think some tile variation would help though. 



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Lucaiver @ 8/26/2016 22:37 commented on Well Lit Bar

I feel like the line from the shelf could be extended along the entirety of the bar table to provide some contrast from the background. This is so quaint tho, and I could tell it was a bar without looking at the title so GJ 



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Lucaiver @ 8/26/2016 00:36 commented on Bye Shinx

Nit-picky is perfect, thank you so much. Sometimes it can be hard to get solid critiques from people. (: I think I tried too hard to keep the color count where it was. I had a hard time choosing the colors for the sky, and I was hesitant to use the dark purple for precisely that reason. I see what you mean with the spine. :\ The sky was rushed compared to the rest of it too, so the messy linework doesn't surprise me. I was at a loss for what to do with it.

I outlined the arm cause I thought that defining the shape was important... so I went for that instead of adding a darker color for contrast to fix the problem. May not have been worth it tho.

Thank you for your time. (:



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Lucaiver @ 8/23/2016 15:18 commented on Oh Edo Towns

Woww I love the way things are outlined, and the gentle ground textures, and how everything feels like it's in its own space. I love isometric, good job (:



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Lucaiver @ 8/23/2016 11:52 commented on Sewer Tiles

Maybe vary the slime tile more? It's all the same bubble form, and I personally like tile variation. Plus I'm not sure how a liquid got that... wavy? Love the brick texture tho (:



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Lucaiver @ 8/19/2016 11:43 commented on Card Warriors - Cloud

I like it! It's adorable (:



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Lucaiver @ 8/15/2016 00:43 commented on Pretty Boy

Whoaa I haven't seen that technique for AA o__o It looks really nice and clean. Keeping this for reference!



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Lucaiver @ 8/14/2016 14:10 commented on Windy Dusty

Super smooth animation! I love it :D



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Lucaiver @ 8/13/2016 12:03 commented on Project Screens #3

I love how well everything is rendered! I feel like some of it is hard to read, but I think putting in some dark colors would help that a lot - just to keep things looking separate from the surrounding space. Looks great tho!



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Lucaiver @ 8/11/2016 23:56 commented on SuperMario

The hat wiggle, while cute, I think is unnecessary and draws too much attention. It's the thing that's moving the most. Maybe tone that down or stop it? Looks good!



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Lucaiver @ 8/11/2016 23:47 commented on Holy Book

Even with how small it is, i can see it's a holy book at x1. good job (:



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Lucaiver @ 8/11/2016 23:45 commented on Avatar

Don't delete your art! It's good to be able to look back and see things you did wrong or right, or see how you've improved over time. You're doing fine!



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Lucaiver @ 8/8/2016 16:11 commented on Raccoon City - Pixel Dailies

2x is often what looks best imo, but the 1x looks really good too! I think it would be fine if you posted it. I really like how this turned out :)



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Lucaiver @ 7/30/2016 01:23 commented on Metroid - Underwater Tileset

the mockup really puts it into perspective. I love it!! <3



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Lucaiver @ 4/14/2016 01:58 commented on Floppy goat boy

Thanks man (:



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Lucaiver @ 3/28/2016 14:52 commented on Jelly

I like the frames, but the timing is off. It looks like it's lagging. It's cute tho!



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Lucaiver @ 3/28/2016 14:50 commented on BEE

i was like 'oh is that cake'? But no, dear god ,,,

Looks good tho i like it lol



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Lucaiver @ 3/28/2016 14:47 commented on Pixel Block

honestly they're pretty good. They read pretty well even at x1. Personally I'm not sure what could be improved upon.