Well i was always scared of you guys because your some pretty serious pixelers :P, but i brought up my courage and decided to submit a piece so here it is :)

i really like the dirt, but the highlighting on the grass looks to different from the base color. 

is that water? and i think your monsters need some shadow,,
but i really liked the tree :P

welcome to PJ linx!, I'd have to say you're off to a good start. O.K, if the water is supposed to be a water fall, it looks good, if it's not, then lets just make it one =D, move everything above the "waterfall" upwards, so you can fit in the lower tree up there, make sure  where the waterfall starts, the grass turns to the darkest shade of brown from the dirt, then we'll work on rocks or just leave it that way if it works well. I think  the wizard is great, but he seems to stand out from the other characters, try giving the creatures a darker outline. If the waterfall thing is too difficult, I can do a quick edit that you can work on from there.

Just because your art totally sucks and you have no talent doesn't mean you should be scared to post here!

Dont worry there will always be people like him on the internet all we can do is smile say F*** you and get on with our days



Also i will look up on that color theory


Edited by linx - 20 January 2009 at 1:46pm

Linx, good work on the waterfall, I noticed the last peice of grass that falls onto the path(last2) are cut off. The best to learn is to do your own thing, I forgot about that, sorry if I tried to help to much, KUTGW

I'd delve more into blues-yellows with the grass, lookin' good though!

I like this man! he's so kind.

I think that there are few problems colour wise. I'll get my edit in or something to help :)

Well hello and welcome. All I can say now is.. you're heading in the right direction. Keep it up like this, and don't be afraid to try things. Sometimes you'll surprise yourself.

Just a little thing to mention. I made a quick drawing of what I think will look better for the waterfall:



I think that way you'll create some more depth. Another thing is to up your contrast on the trees and use 3 colors instead of 4. (Make the dark colors darker, and the highlights lighter)

What I meant with those red lines is the outlining of the waterfall. Move the "tip over" line a bit higher so that it creates a bit more depth. Also round the edges of the rocks a bit to the left and the right of the waterfall.

I hope I make any sense there since english isn't my main language.

Hey, just to say i apologise for being unable to catch bren0098 before you saw his post. He'll be dealt with. I'll leave the post up for reference purposes.

As long as it will be a learning curve for you I won't get mad. If not... finish this mockup! You're doing fine!