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Lahra
Seaman 
Joined: 14 May 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 37 |
   Topic: Cartoon FarmerPosted: 14 June 2009 at 3:52am |
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Hi, here is my Cartoon Farmer.
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chloe-whatever
Seaman
Joined: 11 June 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 5 |
Posted: 17 June 2009 at 7:06am |
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Accroding to his feet - he's falling down. And im sorry, but he's likely to have a tumor on his left side. What is it? An ear or hair? If it's an ear it should be seen with such perspective. If it's hair - the colour should be different.
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NotlikeTheOther
Midshipman 
Joined: 18 November 2008 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 70 |
Posted: 17 June 2009 at 10:17am |
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He needs a pocket on his overall bib, I agree about the ear issue.
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The Blindman
Seaman
Joined: 22 January 2009 Location: Estonia Online Status: Offline Posts: 12 |
Posted: 18 June 2009 at 2:04am |
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I agree with what others said. But I think he is highly over-dithered, especially his skin, and 45 colors is way too much for such a sprite.
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cure
Commander 
Joined: 23 March 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2859 |
Posted: 19 June 2009 at 2:07am |
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also, tremendous pillow-shading (pick a light source and stick with it- using much more contrast between shades than you've done here). Hue-shifting and a better pose are also needed, the top half is almost in 3/4 view while the bottom half is turned to the side
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