Pixel Joint Forum: Hatty Hattington FanArt (from BattleBlock Theater)

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   Hello people I just did a FanArt of Hatty Hattington from the new XBLA game BattleBlock Theater, this is what I done:

I just need your opinions if there's some shading mistakes by that way, I could be able to upload it on the Gallery, Thanks!

Edited by PAMVllo - 15 April 2013 at 3:33pm

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PAMVllo Seaman Joined: 05 July 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13	Topic: Hatty Hattington FanArt (from BattleBlock Theater) Posted: 15 April 2013 at 1:57pm
	Hello people I just did a FanArt of Hatty Hattington from the new XBLA game BattleBlock Theater, this is what I done: I just need your opinions if there's some shading mistakes by that way, I could be able to upload it on the Gallery, Thanks! Edited by PAMVllo - 15 April 2013 at 3:33pm
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Bryroz Seaman Joined: 23 November 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 24	Posted: 15 April 2013 at 4:13pm
	One thing that seems to be off with this piece that the lighting makes no sense, where is the light directed at this character? The light source appears in the right of the character, but when you get to the top of the head a shadow pops up in front the hat. It should be behind rather than in front. Another thing wrong with this piece is staircase banding, and some AA problems. I worked on him abit, and shown somethings that should be changed, I would suggest to use this as a reference. Hope this helps :D
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PAMVllo Seaman Joined: 05 July 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13	Posted: 15 April 2013 at 4:24pm
	You're so good! I really need to improve more, Thanks PD: I think I press the wrong buttom and report you Sorry Update: I was thinking that I could submit on my account and gives you the credit, but I think you deserve this more that me, what you think? Edited by PAMVllo - 15 April 2013 at 4:35pm
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Bryroz Seaman Joined: 23 November 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 24	Posted: 15 April 2013 at 5:03pm
	Well, I really dont care if you post this or not. But, I would strongly advise you to work on it, and to have more of a difference from mine. All I did was just put in some AA, colors, and corrected some lighting problems. If enough time is spent on this, it can turn out to be a really good piece.
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PAMVllo Seaman Joined: 05 July 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13	Posted: 15 April 2013 at 5:16pm
	Anyway I'm going to use the one that you did, If I can make a much better improvement and Again Thanks so much for the help!
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