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Quote H|F Replybullet Topic: CAN BE DELETED - She's got a Mech suit
    Posted: 27 November 2013 at 5:44pm

I'm abandoning this sorry


Um so I want to post this but I must warn that I am very unsure if I want to keep the concept.... there are SO many issues and I am not sure if I am pushing beyond my limits in a bad way?




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Quote AlexHW Replybullet Posted: 27 November 2013 at 9:43pm
I think the concept/composition needs some adjusting- there's nothing that pulls the eye in because everything is vertical without much conflict/tension.
That can be fine, but it could also be more visually gripping. Instead of just drawing what you're imagining, try playing with the spaces and things you don't see, if that makes sense...
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