Pixel Joint Forum: My first Monster

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   I wanted to ask you guys for some suggestions on this sprite... I'm trying to achieve a talesweaver style of coloring but its difficult. On the picture below, the cat (left) is the coloring styling i want to replicate on the right is what i've done so far.Anything red,black or brown are my editting lines so ignore those. Any comment and suggestions please post thank you  

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Ebordenave Seaman Joined: 01 February 2006 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 8	Topic: My first Monster Posted: 01 February 2006 at 9:56am
	I wanted to ask you guys for some suggestions on this sprite... I'm trying to achieve a talesweaver style of coloring but its difficult. On the picture below, the cat (left) is the coloring styling i want to replicate on the right is what i've done so far.Anything red,black or brown are my editting lines so ignore those. Any comment and suggestions please post thank you Update Edited by Ebordenave
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Psychotic_Carp Commander Joined: 02 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1008	Posted: 01 February 2006 at 6:22pm
	I think your doing great with the body except the chest/abdomen area seems a bit flat
	got game?
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Ebordenave Seaman Joined: 01 February 2006 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 8	Posted: 01 February 2006 at 9:40pm
	how would i make the chest/abdomen come out more? C&C please oh and also if you notice carefully the white area on his face is his mouth and it shouuld look like a grin with sharp teeth but i dont know how to do it. If any of you have played sonic adventure and remember what the chao with the evil grin looked like then you know what im talking about
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 01 February 2006 at 9:58pm
	Perhaps by adding a highlight color at the bellybutton area. I like it as is though. The teeth are is too small just have some contrast and it'll look fine. I like it very much.
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Psychotic_Carp Commander Joined: 02 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1008	Posted: 02 February 2006 at 12:58pm
	its not finished but heres an ide
	got game?
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Ebordenave Seaman Joined: 01 February 2006 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 8	Posted: 03 February 2006 at 10:03am
	I like it so far, can't wait to see the finished product
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..::Naso::.. Commander Joined: 13 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 200	Posted: 06 February 2006 at 5:17pm
	yea it dose look good so far, really reminds me of that smart kits digimon from seson #3 =D
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