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Azrael
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    Posted: 08 May 2006 at 12:01am
hi i'm new here, actually I already here for sometime, learn the tutorial, admiring other ppl art, and learn great deal about pixel art, here my shot in pixel art, comment and critics are welcome



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Quote Skull Replybullet Posted: 08 May 2006 at 7:56am
Sweet. The hair detail is very nice, and the AA and shine is super. Perhaps, some hand definition?
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Quote Monkey 'o Doom Replybullet Posted: 08 May 2006 at 9:02am
AA? There is no aa.

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Quote Souly Replybullet Posted: 08 May 2006 at 9:40am
And what 'shine' ?

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Quote Skull Replybullet Posted: 08 May 2006 at 9:46am
Originally posted by Monkey 'o Doom

AA? There is no aa.

Sure there is, the softening arounf the red cross on the shoulder.. and I classed shine as the white on the shorts, and it it was blended into the short colour.
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Quote Shark Replybullet Posted: 08 May 2006 at 10:07am
this piece has no AA, and it needs some. up the contrast on the
clothing aswell it all looks sooooo 2D
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Quote Lawrence Replybullet Posted: 08 May 2006 at 11:27am
There are some colours which aren't needed, because they're so similar to other colours and this piece in fact has high contrast, eg. on the face, on the T-shirt etc.
The shading on the knees looks a bit dodgy too, think about where the light is exactly coming from.

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Quote Setzer Replybullet Posted: 08 May 2006 at 11:34am
I feel like all that dithering is unnecesary :\
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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 08 May 2006 at 7:17pm
The pose seems a bit off, but I do like what you've got so far. :) Well done!
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Quote Azrael Replybullet Posted: 14 May 2006 at 9:02pm
thx for all the C&C, i add some AA and fix the shading n hilite, is it look better?
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Quote Pixel_Outlaw Replybullet Posted: 14 May 2006 at 10:11pm
heh i could see this in a gameboy color game. Very solid work.
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