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Quote Atomicrat12 Replybullet Topic: Sapphire
    Posted: 09 June 2006 at 12:18pm

im working on a pixelart of a cut sapphire, but im not sure if anythings wronge with it (flameruler13 helped me, but i just wanted 2 see if anything else was wronge with it)

i dithered it on the new one, so it looks better

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Quote cure Replybullet Posted: 09 June 2006 at 12:52pm

Rule #1:  Upload the right filetype.  Never .jpg (or .bmp)*, always .gif or .png .  Otherwise the image looks blurred and we can't efficiently critique it.  Maybe you already knew this, and it was a simple mistake.  Either way, try reuploading it.

*Edited to cover all sh*tty filetypes.



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Quote Ensellitis Replybullet Posted: 09 June 2006 at 12:54pm
First off, NEVER save pixel art as JPG.  It ruins the quality drastically.  Please save it as a gif or png first, then I will be able to provide you with some good crits
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Quote Boder Replybullet Posted: 09 June 2006 at 12:56pm
Right off the bat, I see you JPGed it. Don't do this. JPEG format features lossy compression, which means what we see is not what you drew.
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Quote Atomicrat12 Replybullet Posted: 09 June 2006 at 1:04pm
i'll fix it l8er, it'll be fixed by 2nite

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Quote Atomicrat12 Replybullet Posted: 09 June 2006 at 1:04pm
and, not like it maters, but it's bmp
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Quote Pixel_Outlaw Replybullet Posted: 09 June 2006 at 1:44pm
Originally posted by Atomicrat12

(flameruler13 helped me

Oh...........

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Quote Skull Replybullet Posted: 09 June 2006 at 1:55pm
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Originally posted by Atomicrat12

(flameruler13 helped me

Oh...........





And yes, the jpg quality really messes this up, doesn't look much like pixel art down to that.
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Quote Ensellitis Replybullet Posted: 09 June 2006 at 1:58pm
Originally posted by Atomicrat12

and, not like it maters, but it's bmp


http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f259/atomicrat12/Sapphire. jpg

No, it's not.
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Quote Nitram Replybullet Posted: 09 June 2006 at 3:02pm
Well it was bmp photobucket converts bmp to jpg :[
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Quote Monkey 'o Doom Replybullet Posted: 09 June 2006 at 3:28pm
THEN USE PNG OR GIF OR TIF OR WTF!

RPG is numberwang.
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Quote Nitram Replybullet Posted: 09 June 2006 at 3:40pm

"i dithered it on the new one, so it looks better"

Although I can't see that since it's jpg'd, I can tell it's not gonna look to good since you dithered it. Sapphire's are gems inwhich they are shiny, never dither anything you want to look shiny.



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Quote Bifur Replybullet Posted: 09 June 2006 at 4:35pm
even if its jpg i can see u have no care with the real beauty of gems.. the lithg refreaction... search for some ref 

I know! Leafs shouldn't make shadow...
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Quote Flameruler13 Replybullet Posted: 09 June 2006 at 5:17pm
Originally posted by Skull

Originally posted by Pixel_Outlaw

Originally posted by Atomicrat12

(flameruler13 helped me

Oh...........





And yes, the jpg quality really messes this up, doesn't look much like pixel art down to that.


all i said was it sucked-fix it and post it on the forum

u guys r jerks


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Quote Ensellitis Replybullet Posted: 09 June 2006 at 5:23pm

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Quote Flameruler13 Replybullet Posted: 09 June 2006 at 5:31pm
cool


Souly is A GIANT (and stupid) DONUT MANATEE.


 

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Quote Atomicrat12 Replybullet Posted: 09 June 2006 at 5:35pm

Here's the new sapphire

it's a png now, so now u can look at it

 

"even if its jpg i can see u have no care with the real beauty of gems.. the lithg refreaction... search for some ref "

i have, i found a picture of a sapphire ring on google, which im going to make this into, this is just the sapphire.

older one-

and, i do need 2 add some light/dark spots in different places



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Quote Ensellitis Replybullet Posted: 09 June 2006 at 5:53pm
The edges that are closer to the viewer should be lighter, not the same color as the border.

Dithering is best for softening the details, with this being a jewel, you may want to dither a bit less to make it crispier.
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Quote Atomicrat12 Replybullet Posted: 09 June 2006 at 6:20pm

my friend this looks good, bit i want to know for sure

http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f259/atomicrat12/Sapphire3 .png

wat do u think?

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Quote Bifur Replybullet Posted: 09 June 2006 at 6:21pm
the limit angle of the spahire is low so when light reaches enters in it , it makes lot of refreaction in it untill its able to get out of the gem ,

so u should make one basic highligh , samaller highlights on the corners followed  really black spaces with saturated spaces in the middle 

I know! Leafs shouldn't make shadow...
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Quote Souly Replybullet Posted: 09 June 2006 at 8:06pm
Originally posted by Atomicrat12

(flameruler13 helped me)

Well then I guess you're f**ked.

I am the jesus of PJ.
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 09 June 2006 at 9:37pm
Leave Flammy alone, he's a real "gem" around here.

@Atomicrat12, Try bringing in som whites to add shine and sparckle.
Check them all out since I couldn't quite fint the gemstone one, but its in there and really well written. I highly recommend these tutorials. http://www.tcp-ip.or.jp/~s-iga/tips/tips&tricks.html


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Quote Blick Replybullet Posted: 10 June 2006 at 12:33am
Gems are specifically cut to absorb and trap any light that passes through them and make said light bounce off each flat plane within them to make the gem become as close to its own infinite light source as possible (obviously light is lost since you can see it) and for this reason I strongly advise you to work on something less complex. Find something with a lightsource that's easier to follow (even metal is easier than cut gems) and comprehend and try learning from that. Because at your skill level (and at just about anyone else's) it's going to be difficult to make anything convincing and even if you do, you won't know why it is so and in turn learn nothing.


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Quote Skull Replybullet Posted: 10 June 2006 at 2:00am
Might want to now loose the black outline.
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Quote Atomicrat12 Replybullet Posted: 10 June 2006 at 8:58am

Here's my newest work-

Originally posted by Blick

I strongly advise you to work on something less complex.

the main reason im working on this is for a game, and i wanted 2 make it myself, and im not going to give up now. I wanted 2 make it anyway, i like sapphires

p.s. just wondering....... y does everyone h8 flameruler13?!

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Quote Bifur Replybullet Posted: 10 June 2006 at 11:12am
little story:
flameruler13: Hi i need help!
Bifur:heres urhelp!
flamerules13:GTFO *throw help in bifur*


why dont u try to use contrast and maybe white

I know! Leafs shouldn't make shadow...
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Quote Pixel_Outlaw Replybullet Posted: 10 June 2006 at 11:22am

Flammy is a good guy he is like the low wolf that has to lay on it's back and let the top animal maul it. Sorry mr.13. I don't hate you but your introductory post left something of a bad taste in many peoples' mouths.

Perhaps add some hard shines to the facets now.

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