Pixel Joint Forum: Shark!

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Pieface
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Topic: Shark!
Posted: 25 October 2006 at 12:06pm

Well i finally got inspiration to do something and that is a shark

Only problem is im having trouble drawing his body

, just tell me what you think so far, if you can

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Dra_chan
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Posted: 25 October 2006 at 1:20pm

You should finish the whole lineart first and then color it.
Your lines need a bit cleaning, there are some extra black pixels.

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Pieface
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Posted: 25 October 2006 at 1:31pm

yeh

Im not finished on the lines yet, like im probably gonna change the water and everything, i only coloured it in tbh to help remind me where my light source is etc and i made a shape that looked like a shark fin to begin with that made me start a whole shark

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Pieface
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Posted: 25 October 2006 at 2:03pm

UPDATE: Ive finished the Line Art on the shark, colouring was just a quick rough by the way before you complain about it

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Larwick
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Posted: 25 October 2006 at 2:07pm

Okay so you don't want us to crit your colouring or lines, so what shall we crit now?

Perhaps it would be cool, as an idea, to have it look like a camera is looking half over the water and half under, like you see in some movies. Then you can add all the interesting details of underwater as well as having the nice simplicity of the sky.

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Pieface
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Posted: 25 October 2006 at 2:24pm

Yeh lar thas a great Idea, you could crit the sun and Cloud

, nah you can crit some of it if you want, eg the lines of the shark

*tries to add rocks now

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WIP (Work In Progress)
Pixel Joint Forum : Pixel Art : WIP (Work In Progress)

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Pieface Commander Joined: 09 February 2006 Location: England Online Status: Offline Posts: 146	Topic: Shark! Posted: 25 October 2006 at 12:06pm
	Well i finally got inspiration to do something and that is a shark Only problem is im having trouble drawing his body , just tell me what you think so far, if you can
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Dra_chan Commander Joined: 20 February 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 628	Posted: 25 October 2006 at 1:20pm
	You should finish the whole lineart first and then color it. Your lines need a bit cleaning, there are some extra black pixels.
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Pieface Commander Joined: 09 February 2006 Location: England Online Status: Offline Posts: 146	Posted: 25 October 2006 at 1:31pm
	yeh Im not finished on the lines yet, like im probably gonna change the water and everything, i only coloured it in tbh to help remind me where my light source is etc and i made a shape that looked like a shark fin to begin with that made me start a whole shark
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Pieface Commander Joined: 09 February 2006 Location: England Online Status: Offline Posts: 146	Posted: 25 October 2006 at 2:03pm
	UPDATE: Ive finished the Line Art on the shark, colouring was just a quick rough by the way before you complain about it
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Larwick Commander Joined: 18 July 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 4015	Posted: 25 October 2006 at 2:07pm
	Okay so you don't want us to crit your colouring or lines, so what shall we crit now? Perhaps it would be cool, as an idea, to have it look like a camera is looking half over the water and half under, like you see in some movies. Then you can add all the interesting details of underwater as well as having the nice simplicity of the sky.

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Pieface Commander Joined: 09 February 2006 Location: England Online Status: Offline Posts: 146	Posted: 25 October 2006 at 2:24pm
	Yeh lar thas a great Idea, you could crit the sun and Cloud , nah you can crit some of it if you want, eg the lines of the shark tries to add rocks now
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Topic: Shark!