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Pandora
Seaman
Joined: 09 March 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 23 |
![]() Topic: The Wicked Witch of the WestPosted: 02 April 2008 at 1:53pm |
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I'm looking for a bit of feedback about what I have so far, as well as any tips on how to improve the hat (because I know it isn't really satisfactory) and do creases in the clothes..
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M.E.
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Joined: 26 February 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 430 |
![]() Posted: 03 April 2008 at 12:18am |
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Hello Pandora,
Interesting to see that you are aiming for a more sexier witch than the original! Apart from the good ol' help of using a reference, there is at least some things that I note when viewing this piece. There should be a width of the eye BETWEEN the eyes. They are now too close together. Looking at the angle of the shoulders the breasts should be at the same angle. For the mouth, hands and anatomy I would still suggest using references. Check the middle finger on the hand. Also the hand is really facing forward which is impossible to do with the arm that is attached to it at the moment. A suggestion for the hat would be to avoid the zigzagging and shade as if the hat were a cylinder. Personally I would make the hat more like the one from Harry Potter, but the original has this rigid straight form. The pictures on google - picture search on the original wicked witch has straight vertical shading on it. Hope this helps and good luck in keeping her fresh and youg :) Best regards from M.E. |
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