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Quote theguy Replybullet Topic: Death (weekly challenge entry)
    Posted: 18 August 2008 at 9:58am


Best viewed on mid tone or dark backgrounds. Any Crits?


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Quote Luca Replybullet Posted: 18 August 2008 at 11:39am
the blade could be a little bigger and his coat could be more baggy.
other than that good job :)
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Quote theguy Replybullet Posted: 18 August 2008 at 12:49pm
Like this?


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Quote Luca Replybullet Posted: 18 August 2008 at 1:02pm
yep i think its better now
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Quote theguy Replybullet Posted: 18 August 2008 at 1:14pm
Thanks :]
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Quote CaKsTeR Replybullet Posted: 18 August 2008 at 1:39pm
Maybe some whisps of breath coming from the shadowed face.
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Quote theguy Replybullet Posted: 18 August 2008 at 2:33pm
No, because he is death after all.
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Quote Wattsie1993 Replybullet Posted: 18 August 2008 at 2:37pm
Take out the cloud. Or make it smaller with the whisps spiralling around death and his weapon.
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Quote theguy Replybullet Posted: 18 August 2008 at 2:43pm
It's not a cloud it's fog and this is how I envision him, I imagine Death to have a cloud of fog follow him where he goes.
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Quote theguy Replybullet Posted: 21 August 2008 at 6:40am
I made an update:




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