Pixel Joint Forum: Steampunk Tank

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   I was doodling and drew this. I liked it so I pixeled it.

I'm not sure how to havew the windshield. I kinda like the first one the best. Creative Criticism?

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nomadic_cupcake Midshipman Joined: 05 December 2008 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 55	Topic: Steampunk Tank Posted: 31 January 2009 at 8:49pm
	I was doodling and drew this. I liked it so I pixeled it. I'm not sure how to havew the windshield. I kinda like the first one the best. Creative Criticism?
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greenraven Commander Joined: 08 September 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2598	Posted: 31 January 2009 at 9:01pm
	Steampunk generally suggests steam. Try adding a couple of pipes. Also this seems to remind me of Dune 2.
	"pwnage comes with patience, practice and planning." ~ Jalonso
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nomadic_cupcake Midshipman Joined: 05 December 2008 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 55	Posted: 01 February 2009 at 7:25am
	I added some steam, I tried to add a few pipes, but I couldn't get them right. Edited by nomadic_cupcake - 01 February 2009 at 7:25am
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Metaru Commander Joined: 28 December 2025 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3305	Posted: 01 February 2009 at 4:22pm
	a pipe with some smoke doesnt make it steampunk. what you need to understand is that in most mechanical desings based on this genre are bulky structures filled with all sorts of since they need to hold huge steam engines to power them, with pipes coming out of them since at the time this is place coolant chemicals arent avaliable. check this link, so you can have a rough idea of these mechanisms and gadgets. Edited by Metaru - 01 February 2009 at 4:24pm
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