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Native American cyberpunk chick.  Some good hard critique would be appreciated. A couple issues jump out at me, such as the shape of her cheek being kinda weird, and I'm not at all sure on the palette. I wanted the light to be kind of bluish in front of her face, but I couldn't get the colors right, so I did this instead. 

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http://thumbs.dreamstime.com/thumb_265/1209970938X75OZE.jpg
I found this pic, thought it was neat, and decided it was a good time to work on pixeling hair!

Edited by Perihelion - 06 March 2009 at 10:36am

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Perihelion Seaman Joined: 06 March 2009 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 7	Topic: It's not a Super Saiyan, I swear! Posted: 06 March 2009 at 9:31am
	Native American cyberpunk chick. Some good hard critique would be appreciated. A couple issues jump out at me, such as the shape of her cheek being kinda weird, and I'm not at all sure on the palette. I wanted the light to be kind of bluish in front of her face, but I couldn't get the colors right, so I did this instead. Reference: http://thumbs.dreamstime.com/thumb_265/1209970938X75OZE.jpg I found this pic, thought it was neat, and decided it was a good time to work on pixeling hair! Edited by Perihelion - 06 March 2009 at 10:36am
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Evilagram Commander Joined: 05 August 2008 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 168	Posted: 06 March 2009 at 10:38am
	I like it so far, nice texture for the skin. I'd suggest not making the back of the jawbone and the musle on the front of the neck so light. It ruins the depth.
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Perihelion Seaman Joined: 06 March 2009 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 7	Posted: 06 March 2009 at 11:23am
	How's this?
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Evilagram Commander Joined: 05 August 2008 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 168	Posted: 06 March 2009 at 3:43pm
	The thing you did with the neck muscle, do that with the back of the jaw bone.
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Perihelion Seaman Joined: 06 March 2009 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 7	Posted: 06 March 2009 at 4:14pm
	How's this? I smoothed the neck out too. Thanks, btw.
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Perihelion Seaman Joined: 06 March 2009 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 7	Posted: 08 March 2009 at 2:06am
	Tweaked a number of things, including the palette, and started on the hair. The feather went away because I couldn't figure out where to put it, but I might draw it in again later. Edit: More hair. Edited by Perihelion - 08 March 2009 at 12:34pm
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Hapiel Rear Admiral Joined: 30 June 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3266	Posted: 08 March 2009 at 2:37pm
	The new palette is a huge improvement! The feather had no function before, maybe it will later, but youll find out by then! Please keep posting, this becomes very interesting to watch!
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Perihelion Seaman Joined: 06 March 2009 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 7	Posted: 09 March 2009 at 5:03am
	Thanks! As it turns out, I'm going to have to put this off for about a week because I need to not fail out of college, but I'm definitely going to come back to it, so check back later. Edited by Perihelion - 09 March 2009 at 5:03am
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Metaru Commander Joined: 28 December 2025 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3305	Posted: 11 March 2009 at 12:40am
	you can't go wrong with cyberpunk.
	I ate leel's babies
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