I am making a game and i am trying to make a title page.

this is my draft:




UPDATE:


my reference is here:

http://xbox360media.ign.com/xbox360/image/article/709/709500/halo-3-20060519063057087.jpg

any suggestions  would be helpful.



Edited by Lozd - 18 March 2009 at 6:50pm

I think it's looking really good! What i think you should do though is define the background a tad more so you get more perspective. Also you can't really tell he's standing on a cliff, wich i assume he is. His right leg looks fatter then his left one and (this is just i my opinion) the positioning of his right arm looks random. Apart from this it looks quite good! Good luck!