Mockup??
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Topic: Mockup??
Posted By: FunTuff
Subject: Mockup??
Date Posted: 20 August 2010 at 2:44am
I have made this: It's a (sort of) mockup, you are the seahorse and you have to shoot the other fishes that are in your way. The little sword fish is your mate. I would love some critique and comments. |
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Posted By: Manupix
Date Posted: 20 August 2010 at 2:54am
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Nice concept, needs more work. Your lines are not precise enough, the snake's tail for instance, also it's a little jaggy in places. The colored outlines are weird, they're too close to the background value to be effective. If you keep this bg, make them either darker or white; or else make the bg darker or brighter. The seahorse doesn't really look like one. Also some other animals: turtle, clams. Then you need to make the seahorse more different to be immediately identified to the player. |
Posted By: FunTuff
Date Posted: 20 August 2010 at 5:05am
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Thanks for you comment, I'll work on it!
I can't work at it now, but today or tomorrow I'll post the edit.
Do you think that the blue bubbles thingies (where they can stand on) can stay, cuz it doesn't look right.
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