Vampire Has A Crown
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 13 June 2026 at 4:34am
Topic: Vampire Has A Crown
Posted By: c7_ImHERE
Subject: Vampire Has A Crown
Date Posted: 06 March 2011 at 12:55am
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hi guys! this is my first time at PixelJoint and I pass my artwork and it was rejected, so the "system" says that i should consult to this thread for more improvements and opinions on my art.
eitherway, here is my pixel art: 
feel free to comment to improve my art  tnx!
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Posted By: cure
Date Posted: 06 March 2011 at 10:58am
| it's usually a bad idea to do linework on the interior of a sprite in black, it's so dark that the contrast is usually (as is the case here) too strong for the surrounding colors. what are the things hanging down on the side of the crown? do you have a reference picture of the crown? I don't know that dithering is helping here. the darkest skin tone seems too green. bottom of the head is a bit too flat, maybe define his chin a little, keeping the shape of a human jawbone in mind? why is this nose seen from the side? In general it's just a bit small and simple to warrant its own spot in the gallery, have you considered making a body for it? |
Posted By: c7_ImHERE
Date Posted: 06 March 2011 at 7:04pm
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what are the things hanging down on the side of the crown?
-its just a plain crown, gonna change that... do you have a reference picture of the crown? -uhh i dont have any reference its just a plain idea tnx for correcting me, anyway, its just a head for like an avatar maybe. im still making ideas on how to do the body.. tnx cure~ |