WIP - Plataform Game Mockup
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
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Printed Date: 04 April 2026 at 2:54pm
Topic: WIP - Plataform Game Mockup
Posted By: Programlocura
Subject: WIP - Plataform Game Mockup
Date Posted: 14 March 2011 at 10:42pm
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Hello everybody! First of all, sorry for my english, i'm not a native speaker! This is my first post and all i want is a little help to improve my pixelart technics! :)  It's a platform game mockup, tribute to the old gameboy style! :) How can i improve my skills? :) Thank you! Regards! |
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Posted By: gnodab2
Date Posted: 15 March 2011 at 5:41am
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I like this style totaly and teh font is beautifull.. But the house in the background seems to be very flat i think! |
Posted By: Smilecythe
Date Posted: 15 March 2011 at 2:01pm
| I dont see any spectacular flaws in the style so far. Show us more! |
Posted By: Programlocura
Date Posted: 15 March 2011 at 4:23pm
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Hi! :) @ member_profile.asp?PF=30257&FID=8 - gnodab2 The house is flat, i'm going to add some bright to it. @ member_profile.asp?PF=31333&FID=8 - Smilecythe I'll try to send with more detail and color next time :) Thanks for comments! I'll keep practicing! |
Posted By: W M
Date Posted: 17 March 2011 at 12:15am
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While the house is indeed flat, I think it adds some serious depth and really works for the piece.
I love the whole design, great job there. I really can't find much to critique on -- the only thing i can suggest is trying to make the letters all the same height just for clarity. I understand what you're trying to do, but it CaN eAsIlY bE mIsTaKeN fOr ThIs, and I don't think that's what you want. Keep going with this please! |