My pixel art (critques wanted)
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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
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Printed Date: 13 June 2026 at 12:19pm
Topic: My pixel art (critques wanted)
Posted By: reaper2259
Subject: My pixel art (critques wanted)
Date Posted: 19 November 2014 at 3:26am
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heyy everyone i have decided to make this thread for my pixel art instead of making a new one each time. any help you guys can give me would be great as i am still very new to pixel art.  this was my first char and am overly happy with the outcome for my first try but i do see it needs massive improvements just don't know how to do those improvements lol.  this is my second ever character that i just finished just then, i have been watching the dragon ball z series lately and wanted to make something based off a reference compared to the first char so i chose to try and make young gohan, i am happy with the shoulder armor from this but i think the overall shape on this one is worse than the last. and tips and things to help me improve would be greatly appreciated. |
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Posted By: Mosst
Date Posted: 19 November 2014 at 9:15am
| I think the main reason it might look worse is because his torso his so large. Try get a good balance so that everything looks of reasonable size. |
Posted By: reaper2259
Date Posted: 19 November 2014 at 4:38pm
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yes i agree, i couldn't see what it was before and thought it might have been the legs but now that you mention it i think its the head and body, the head is to small which then made me make the body to big. thanks for the help. |
Posted By: reaper2259
Date Posted: 20 November 2014 at 5:21am
day 3 new character done, dunno if im improving or not lol but its been good practice and fun. decided not to do clothes on this one and tried to do some muscles but im not overly happy with them. |
Posted By: Limes
Date Posted: 20 November 2014 at 10:07am
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at this moment the sprite is too small for you to show all the cracks and details of muscle instead you must suggest muscle, I'll give an edit a go.
http://www.innerbody.com/image/musfov.html - Have any spare time? |