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Mr. Fast Death

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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 06 April 2026 at 12:36pm


Topic: Mr. Fast Death
Posted By: Big nothing
Subject: Mr. Fast Death
Date Posted: 30 April 2006 at 3:00pm

MR. Fast Death come to you, look on his portrait for escape!

C & C?

 

 




Replies:
Posted By: Big nothing
Date Posted: 05 May 2006 at 4:29am
Hey! I need help so comment and help me please


Posted By: 0xDB
Date Posted: 05 May 2006 at 5:06am
Technically, you should try to aa the thing and also shade the inner outlines. And get rid of the pillow shading in the eyes.
Maybe add some shiny spots and nurbs if he's a robot or make it smoother and add more definition to the face if he's human.
Currently i'm not sure, whether he's supposed to be robotic or human. It looks just like a lifeless mask.
The red stripes seem to not fit in very well, i don't know why, maybe they are oversaturated.
Oh one last thing: The nose is probably coming out even further than the cheeks, so it should also get well visible lighting at its side. It currently looks like it's flatter and farer to the back than the cheeks.


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