Sub-Level 13
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
URL: https://pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=2303
Printed Date: 13 June 2026 at 12:19pm
Topic: Sub-Level 13
Posted By: Okko
Subject: Sub-Level 13
Date Posted: 03 June 2006 at 3:04pm
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Hello here, it's me again :) Here is my second try at pixeling ! Dark Version - Light Version - "Animation " try:
It is very simple right now. Next step will be to add a neon (the flashing light source). I think there will be some details to make it less "clean". Any C+C are welcome :) ------------- One day I will find a great, cool, funny and original signature. One day. |
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Posted By: Okko
Date Posted: 12 June 2006 at 1:39pm
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I didn't have much time to work on it, but here is a litle update.
Added a few details, but still failed with the neon :( Thanks in advance for any C+C :) ------------- One day I will find a great, cool, funny and original signature. One day. |
Posted By: Swiifty
Date Posted: 12 June 2006 at 2:26pm
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It doesnt really look like the sign is attached to the wall. I don't know, this maybe is wrong since I'm pretty new to pixelart myself, but everything seems to be too organized? Anyway you got a good start. |
Posted By: Okko
Date Posted: 13 June 2006 at 1:47pm
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Thanks Swiifty for the comments.
It doesnt really look like the sign is attached to the wall Well, it is more in my mind a post or even a paint that a sign. But I try to add some shadow to make it less "glue" to the wall, it didn't end right :(
but everything seems to be too organized? Yep, it's still too clean. Don't know yet what I will add. I surely have to "used" the bricks..
By the way, here is a new update, I finally give the neon a try.
What do you all think about it ? Not sure if I've "enlighted" enough space.. ------------- One day I will find a great, cool, funny and original signature. One day. |
Posted By: Swiifty
Date Posted: 13 June 2006 at 3:04pm
| Looks alot better. Sill the bricks look too organized, and maybe you could add some shadows to the pipe? |
Posted By: Larwick
Date Posted: 13 June 2006 at 3:11pm
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Hmm, unless the wall or sign suddenly jerks inwards the light wouldnt suddenly stop like that. -------------  http://larw-ck.deviantart.com">
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Posted By: Swiifty
Date Posted: 13 June 2006 at 3:59pm
| Yeah, Larwicks right. The light should gradually get darker. |
Posted By: Okko
Date Posted: 14 June 2006 at 2:41pm
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Thanks for the comments :) So I have to work more on the light. Ok, let me try this :) ------------- One day I will find a great, cool, funny and original signature. One day. |
Posted By: Okko
Date Posted: 16 June 2006 at 1:20pm
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Here is the result of my try :
I'm not sure if the light is like you were talking ------------- One day I will find a great, cool, funny and original signature. One day. |
