Birthday pixel
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Category: Pixel Art
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Printed Date: 12 June 2026 at 10:04pm
Topic: Birthday pixel
Posted By: pmprog
Subject: Birthday pixel
Date Posted: 20 September 2006 at 9:38am
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It was my birthday on the 15th, so I thought I'd try and get a decent pixel to start my new year. I'd like comment and any hints/thoughts/suggestions on what I can do to make it better. The head, wings, and background are still to be done.  Thanks |
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Posted By: Souly
Date Posted: 20 September 2006 at 9:43am
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JPEG'D anyways... Aside from the horrible file format, I see a few things you could work on. First of all. All your dithering looks messy and un organized. It just looks randomly placed and it gives it a grainy look, rather then te texture of scales. The ankle looks like the foot has been glued on. You don't have a consistant light source. You've got higlights appearing as if the light is infront of him. And others that show the lightsource is above him. ------------- 
I am the jesus of PJ. |
Posted By: pmprog
Date Posted: 20 September 2006 at 10:08am
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The jpg was just as I loaded it onto the web. it's a BMP at the minute on my machine, it'll be PNG when it's finished. I agree about the dithering, I'll see what I can do Which foot are you on about. I'm guessing it's the one of the left, I can't quite get it to look right, the actual ankle was supposed to be behind the foot, but I the perspectives off for that, so maybe I should keep it at it's current angle and tidy up the ankle. I'll sort out the light source when I sort out the dithering. Thanks for your comments |
Posted By: Souly
Date Posted: 20 September 2006 at 10:11am
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The left foot, yes. I think the reason is because you have a line going from one side to the other. Like they're two seperate parts. -------------
I am the jesus of PJ. |
Posted By: halfDemon
Date Posted: 20 September 2006 at 7:38pm
 I can't crit if I don't know what's supposed to be what and what isn't.------------- Every pixel counts, even the dead ones. |