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Mermaid-Snake

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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 09 June 2026 at 11:04pm


Topic: Mermaid-Snake
Posted By: MashPotato
Subject: Mermaid-Snake
Date Posted: 24 March 2007 at 4:29pm
Hi, first post here ^_^

I've been working on this picture of a mermaid/snake...  I'm still new to pixelling and this is my first piece that's more on the complicated side, so I would appreciate some suggestions on how to improve it.

Agh, I just realized that I forgot to do the hair at the very bottom... ignore that for now ^_~.  I was also considering putting a swirly pattern in the four corners of the box behind the egg shape.

All suggestions are welcome, thanks for your time ^_^

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Posted By: AdrianJensen
Date Posted: 24 March 2007 at 4:33pm
that is so cool.

and fyi, a human/snake hybrid is called a Nāga

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Posted By: MashPotato
Date Posted: 24 March 2007 at 4:43pm
Ah, THAT was the word I was looking for, I couldn't think of it! 
Thanks as well ^_^


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Posted By: AdrianJensen
Date Posted: 24 March 2007 at 5:29pm
i couldn't think of it eather, i had to look it up 

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Posted By: Metaru
Date Posted: 24 March 2007 at 7:23pm
It reminds me the old Style of Disney's Hercules tv series...

well, i can sugest you to add an small bright effect to the circle-thing she holds... or even better, you could turn it into a mirror, where the Human form of the Naga smiles or glares...(i'm not sure, but as far as i know a common habit between nagas was to take the form of females to seduce youths and eat them later... like the succubus)


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Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 24 March 2007 at 9:25pm
I find the BG uneeded here since you didn't AA the egg, still, I'm impressed.

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Posted By: MashPotato
Date Posted: 25 March 2007 at 8:46am
Thanks for the suggestions ^_^
I have aa'd the egg shape (adding a colour), and the inside of the sphere (adding another colour, which I will use for more highlights if I keep it).  I have put a shine on the orb, but I am undecided as to whether I should continue with that or not.  The mirror idea is a bit beyond me at the moment, I'm afraid ^_^

 
EDIT: got rid of the shine and extra colour, made some tweaks and have submitted it to the gallery


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Posted By: leel
Date Posted: 25 March 2007 at 3:50pm
Very nice job.

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Posted By: Metaru
Date Posted: 26 March 2007 at 9:06am
well, consider the idea of the mirror as a challenge...

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Posted By: Necky
Date Posted: 26 March 2007 at 10:28am
VERY nicely done! :D I'd personally add a white shine on the ball she's holding, just to add some volume to it :)


Posted By: MashPotato
Date Posted: 26 March 2007 at 10:55am
Thank you ^_^
I ended up taking out the shine in the final version ( http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/19305.htm - http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/19305.htm ), but maybe I'll put it back in (using the background colour this time) when I get home... I'll try it out ^_^


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