My city
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
URL: https://pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=4263
Printed Date: 09 June 2026 at 11:04pm
Topic: My city
Posted By: Colbak
Subject: My city
Date Posted: 19 May 2007 at 2:15pm
 A City that i make i Put Simpsons and Flanders House, Springfield Hospital, Moe's Bar, A police office invaded by some crazy guy, I get "Pimp my Building" house and i pimp it, I thanks to member_profile.asp?PF=8980&FID=8 - Lollige for the building. So enjoy and tell me what i need PS: THis image is in my gallery because i don't knew about the revision, after the rejected i know about Wip |
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Posted By: Hapiel
Date Posted: 19 May 2007 at 2:51pm
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Not bad :) but there is room for improvement: Water color... and maybe add a flow.. There are some black lines... I like to remove them (jalonso learned me that), you can keep them exept for on the church, there are way to much black lines on there... What are the white dots next to the water? Try to improve your cars.. Or just delete them, like I do ;) Change those letters... Change those people, try using some other colors.. Dont really know how to say that in English but I dont really like the green of the grass, the sand, moe's tavern color, the church color, the colors of the peoples, those from the brige in te park and those from the cars.. The others are mostly fine :) WHats with that park? That tree looks very weird, white dots, stripes in the water... that pretty weird... You made something very large.. than it will be very hard to do some detail work, and do everthing good.... I suggest you try something smaller next time, so you can put alot of time in a building, instead of that you have to rush over them... (police looks like time, hospital too, moes tavern doesnt) Btw, I see you used a building of mine (pimped your style) in it, please give me credit and note me next time... Yes you are allowed to change it, but you are not just allowed to change it a very little bit and put it in a larger work of yours.. This time ill agree, since its very old, but next time please ask, and make shure you give credit (allways give credit to any1 who does anything) |
Posted By: Kfuchoin
Date Posted: 19 May 2007 at 6:23pm
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o.o everything is said...
just 1 more thing... lights and shadows... don't make everything on the same color... putl lgihts and shadows... ------------- may the pixels be with you.. ~Kfuchoin eMo looking for people for an RPG info: http://www.pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=4903 |
Posted By: Colbak
Date Posted: 19 May 2007 at 6:53pm
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Sorry About The "pimp my building" house, I will remember next time And if someone put some good colors of Grass, sand and Water I will be thanks (if I wrote something wrong, sorry im a brasilian) |
Posted By: Colbak
Date Posted: 19 July 2007 at 1:31pm
What do you people think??? |
Posted By: Monkey 'o Doom
Date Posted: 23 July 2007 at 6:15pm
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I agree with lollige: you would benefit from starting on a smaller piece. This work of art shows that you need to learn the fundamentals of detail and shading in the isometric perspective, and those things, like any others, are best learned when you can give them your full attention. Try working on simpler objects to start with and remember to add detail with highlights and shadows. ------------- http://pixelmonkey.ensellitis.com"> 
RPG is numberwang. |
Posted By: soda
Date Posted: 24 July 2007 at 7:53am
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The shadows are not recognizable yet, but the city looks great.
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