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Tarro

Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
URL: https://pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=4736
Printed Date: 09 June 2026 at 11:04pm


Topic: Tarro
Posted By: Hapiel
Subject: Tarro
Date Posted: 30 July 2007 at 12:26am
Metaru asked me to fill his lineart:

This is the last day before I am going with vacation (again), and I hope I can finish it today.. or atleast most of it.. I have done all this in this morning and yesterday evening:



Im posting this here now cos I need some help with folding the t-shirt.. I have tried something but that did not work out, and I have no idea where to start now.(1)

(3)
I need some help with the wood as well..

(4)
Finished the jacket

(5)
Added some red to the wood pattern but that didnt make it some better..

(6)
I really need help with the axe..

(7)
Dithered the hair (Again, lost the first verion!! @#$*&@!!)

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Changed some colors

(9)
better axe

(10)
back to basic (no dithering)
better colors (hair and jacket)
tryd folding (t-shirt)


No replies yet, its 11:30 here, and I have to sleep early... Bye all and have a nice summer! see you in 4 weeks






Replies:
Posted By: Metaru
Date Posted: 31 July 2007 at 12:07am
now that you posted it, i would like to add another question: looks better with the original lineart or with the cleaned lines version?

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Posted By: theguy
Date Posted: 31 July 2007 at 6:01am
quickly checked an I think the sketchy lines ove it look awesome but I also think you should finish coloring it and destroy the inside of the axe handle LINES

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Posted By: marilii
Date Posted: 31 July 2007 at 7:36am
I'm a firm believer in clean lines, so there's my answer, Metaru :)


Posted By: Metaru
Date Posted: 03 August 2007 at 6:56am
well.. i let lollige work with the clean lines version. i'll try to make something with the sketchy one. i've already used it in my last submission.

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Posted By: Luca
Date Posted: 04 August 2007 at 4:12am
can i colour this lineart?


Posted By: Metaru
Date Posted: 06 August 2007 at 7:09am

OF COURSE YOU CAN LUCA. i would feel honored!



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Posted By: Hapiel
Date Posted: 27 August 2007 at 7:51am
Any more helpfull comments (the only one I got was to remove the lines in the handle, very usefull, but I would like to know what to do instead of it)
I just got back from vacation, and ill continue working on it!


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Posted By: Kfuchoin
Date Posted: 27 August 2007 at 9:26am
no eyes?

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eMo

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Posted By: Metaru
Date Posted: 28 August 2007 at 7:45am
nop, no eyes.

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Posted By: Hapiel
Date Posted: 28 August 2007 at 10:34am
Originally posted by Kfuchoin

no eyes?

I asked him to add lines for them... but he didnt gave me


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Posted By: Kfuchoin
Date Posted: 28 August 2007 at 10:43am
so he's blind :O

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eMo

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Posted By: Metaru
Date Posted: 28 August 2007 at 12:48pm
no, he just don't have eyes. it's suposed to be a robot. afterall, if I wanted eyes I would draw them from the begining. isn't that logic?

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Posted By: Kfuchoin
Date Posted: 28 August 2007 at 1:10pm
lol yeah don't get pissed off.. i was joking i didn't knew that tarro was a robot.. in fact

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eMo

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Posted By: Hapiel
Date Posted: 31 August 2007 at 3:31pm
Changed colors... did most of it by hand...
not much better...



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Posted By: Metaru
Date Posted: 31 August 2007 at 11:59pm
you still need to work in the metal of the axe...

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Posted By: Hapiel
Date Posted: 01 September 2007 at 3:27am
Originally posted by Metaru

you still need to work in the metal of the axe...

and the handle as well.. Yes I know.. but its soo hard witch makes its soo hard to get my self to do it..




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Posted By: spartan_117
Date Posted: 01 September 2007 at 7:49am
http://imageshack.us">

adjust the edges as shown here. Makes the axe looks solid not flat.




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Posted By: Hapiel
Date Posted: 02 September 2007 at 2:10am
Originally posted by spartan_117

http://imageshack.us">

adjust the edges as shown here. Makes the axe looks solid not flat.




Thank you spartan :) Ill do, just got the same tip:



I'm new here so I'm not sure what you're allowed to do and what you're not. For instance I donno if you're allowed to change that guy's line art at all. But this is what I'd do to the axe.

I'm not an awesome pixeler, in fact I'm pretty crappy but I've done a lot of weapons before. That axe is really f**ked up an irregular so it's really hard to do - if I was drawing this weapon just by myself I'd give up on it - since you're better maybe you can do something similar and do better.



Something like that - although that looks a bit more "rock like" then metal like, now that I look at it like this. Also there are added lines as well so I'm not sure if you're allowed to do that.

Hope it helps.

~Gelsamel


thanks for your help, but why didnt you post this in the topic?

Im allowed to do anything with the lineart I want :)

The newer version of the axe looks alot better, im going to try that, also im going to copy and paste this into the topic.. please reply next time from there

Greets,
Lollige

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ok im going to start on that axe right now!

EDIT:
Your helpfull comments really helped!! Thanks





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Posted By: Metaru
Date Posted: 03 September 2007 at 9:30am
see luca's http://pixeljoint.com/pixelart/23456.htm">one 

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Posted By: Hapiel
Date Posted: 06 September 2007 at 7:45am
Originally posted by Metaru

see luca's http://pixeljoint.com/pixelart/23456.htm">one 


hmm.. now I cant quit any more.. but I cant beat it aswell :(


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Posted By: Metaru
Date Posted: 06 September 2007 at 9:06am

c'mon, finish it



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Posted By: Hapiel
Date Posted: 06 September 2007 at 9:17am
Originally posted by Metaru

c'mon, finish it



offcourse I will.. I have posted it on pixelation now too, to get some help from the pro's :p


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Posted By: Gelsamel
Date Posted: 06 September 2007 at 8:37pm
Don't like the axe on that one that was linked. And the handle is a bit of a cop out. Still nice though.


Posted By: Aleiav
Date Posted: 07 September 2007 at 12:04am
I wouldn't dither the darkest shade of the coat. It makes it look grainy.


Posted By: Varock Shade
Date Posted: 08 September 2007 at 1:36am
I agree. The coat/jacket looks nice and clean without the dithering... I youre doing nice though. Maybe give the hair a little less saturation, and well... keep it up 

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Posted By: Hapiel
Date Posted: 08 September 2007 at 9:40am
Originally posted by Varock Shade

I agree. The coat/jacket looks nice and clean without the dithering... I youre doing nice though. Maybe give the hair a little less saturation, and well... keep it up 

I did so.. I still need to work on folding alot, but this is what I have now:




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