Possibly a WIP?
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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
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Printed Date: 05 April 2026 at 5:57am
Topic: Possibly a WIP?
Posted By: micr0softener
Subject: Possibly a WIP?
Date Posted: 06 November 2007 at 1:15am
This is, in my opinion, pretty finished, but I think I'd rather risk it here first than in the gallery... it's my first ever attempt at selout and it's on a throwaway character, but there we are. A couple notes- yes, the gun is supposed to be that massive, and that's a grenade-style-thingy in his other hand, and I think that I might have made a bit of a mistake with his helmet design- possibly one dot too many, but I think I'll get another couple opinions. Also, I might need to shift the suit colour more towards the orange and less toward the green region. Opinions? Edits? Personal swipes? Let's have it. |
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Posted By: spartan_117
Date Posted: 06 November 2007 at 1:59am
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animate! get rid of those extra peices and animate. an add transparency when ur done. the suit is fine. the helmet glass turn it orange. looks like the master cheif a bit.------------- |
Posted By: Metaru
Date Posted: 06 November 2007 at 9:23am
I'll let my edit speak for me. i've changed the legs a biot, removed some pixels, and changed the way the left leg and foot were displayed. the rest looks great, i would try to move the head 1px back... but that's just my personal taste. ------------- I ate leel's babies |
Posted By: micr0softener
Date Posted: 06 November 2007 at 1:05pm
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Spartan- I probably will be animating this eventually, but there's nothing sadder than an animation with a character that should have been figured out properly before hand. Plus, I wasn't trying for a 'master cheif' character, I was aiming for an ancient character I used to make when I was a kid, called Spaceman Bob. Yeah, I know, but I'm older now, so his name is much better- Cosmonaut Bob. Just kidding.
Metaru- Thank you so much. You're completely right with your edits, and I think that it's better with knees (tis always irritating to miss something fundamental like that) -wince-. And i've moved the head back like you said. I should be getting it finished soon enough.
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