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WIP Mario Bruffaz Worlds Printed From: Pixel Joint Category: Pixel Art Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress) Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too! URL: https://pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=7363 Printed Date: 12 June 2026 at 10:04pm Topic: WIP Mario Bruffaz Worlds Posted By: Andrio Subject: WIP Mario Bruffaz Worlds Date Posted: 09 November 2008 at 12:50am Hi. First post, yay! I've been working on a mockup flash game of Super Mario Bros. (titled "Mario Bruffaz") on another forum (www.oneclickwifi.net for those who care). I found this site...well, only half an hour ago. Anyways, I got good response about my worlds there. But since this is a Pixel-based site/forum, I'd be getting a more proffesional response. They're kinda finished, but can be worked on a bit more. World 1: Retro Road World 2: Daring Desert World 3: Frightening Forest World 4: Line Lane World 5: Shifting Sky World 6: Chaos City World 7: Outer Space World 8: Magma Mountain Replies: Posted By: Ravey Date Posted: 10 November 2008 at 6:52am They look good, but there's a lack of consistency - Number of colours used in each world is very different. You shouldn't see colours that well in the dark, maybe use blue tinted colours? First world is the only one that has a 3D perspective of the floor. Bushes in the background of world 3 probably shouldn't be outlined. The lighting falls flat, especially on the buildings... You should consider a definate light source. The dithering doesn't look right and isn't consistent in each of the worlds. The outline of the sand and clouds should probably be smoothed better, or removed to be consistent. Posted By: Club Beuker Date Posted: 10 November 2008 at 7:33am Not to mention all the dirty lining... ------------- Without me, it's just aweso

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