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Feedback? :P

Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 13 June 2026 at 8:19pm


Topic: Feedback? :P
Posted By: DezireSoft
Subject: Feedback? :P
Date Posted: 20 January 2009 at 12:36am


Yeah, suckish, but, feedback, give me some areas that look week[other than the head, and the "elbow-less" >.>

Help me improve.


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Posted By: Nessiah
Date Posted: 20 January 2009 at 1:25am
I think the chest...
He looks too ...1D/2d? I can't really explain it :<


Posted By: Evilagram
Date Posted: 20 January 2009 at 2:21am
Try practicing anatomy, I mean real anatomy. It always helps to have a good understanding of the human form.


Posted By: DezireSoft
Date Posted: 20 January 2009 at 11:06am
Originally posted by Evilagram

Try practicing anatomy, I mean real anatomy. It always helps to have a good understanding of the human form.


Yeah, but, it's meant to look sort-of cartoony, not realistic..

The head is just there, to be there, until I decide a better head, then I'm gonna give it more of a 45 degree angle.


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Posted By: Evilagram
Date Posted: 20 January 2009 at 11:32am
Originally posted by DezireSoft

Originally posted by Evilagram

Try practicing anatomy, I mean real anatomy. It always helps to have a good understanding of the human form.


Yeah, but, it's meant to look sort-of cartoony, not realistic..
 
I hate hearing this. Sorry, but it's just painful to hear.
 
It always pays to have a good knowledge of realistic human anatomy. It's useful to know how the real thing looks so you don't screw up the minutia when abstracting from it.
 
Oh, and as for specifics, the crotch looks really creepy. I see what you were going for, but you overdid it.


Posted By: DezireSoft
Date Posted: 20 January 2009 at 11:37am
XD I know, I didn't care much about the crotch.  Thanks for the tip though.  I was actually gonna redo a much bigger scaled sprite, since this one is sort of angering me.. XD It's too.. small.

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